|Reviews for Children of The Realm|
| Alice chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Loved the first chapter! It'd be great if you could carry this on, I'm really keen to know what's going to happen. The way you've written this is really enjoyable to read, please carry it on :)
| Clouted Cankerblossom chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I'm well aware it's been ages since you wrote this so you probably won't be continuing it but I loved the first chapter, your style of writing is enjoyable to read and there aren't many mistakes and I think you have all the characterisation spot on (even just characters who were in for a moment- Jac, Tara etc.)
I'm loving the idea and I'm guessing Ollie is his... brother? Or cousin? I'm not sure, I'm really curious to find out though so I hope you continue!