Reviews for I bet
xXTsundenierXx chapter 1 . 7/17
You dirty minded little...little...-insert word dirty minded
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13
I really like your story...
lizzie chapter 2 . 6/26
aaww come on *pout face* i liked this story soooooo much thank you for takeing my boerdness away
Alley McNally chapter 2 . 6/11
Not a bad effort. Natsu didn't quite seem Natsu so much at times, but it did feel generally like the two of them making love. I'll write some of that off due to the fact that this was written back in '12 and Natsu wasn't quite as fleshed out then as he is now. Still, it did not feel as if two mannequins dressed up as Natsu and Lucy had sex. Which is something that a lot of people do when they write pairings like this. Good effort and I hope that you wrote more things beside this story!
Isabell3 chapter 2 . 5/31
This was good and fun to read ! good work :D
artistofthemind chapter 2 . 1/18
Oh Gray. He's so evil.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/8
I enjoyed this short story very much thank you!
crystalwing chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Cool !
Make another one shot of NALU.
Godschildtweety chapter 2 . 10/27/2014
Really good
ichiberrypervert chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
It was amazing and funny at the same time. :D
Great job!
Twishadowhunter chapter 2 . 6/30/2014
Loved that!
Alaina Kuski chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Ha ha ha! This was good!
Starling ming chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
more chapters please...•...I'm in love
mocka01 chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
U r not the only one that feels like a pervet some times*evil smile*
Nightcore Majesty chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
OMG!ahhhhhh so good! Love UR imaginations and I better go to school now because I'm kinda late!


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