Reviews for Too Much To Ask For
Jacqueline4602 chapter 15 . 5/25
Hi! I'm reading this for the first time, and I noticed something and wanted to mention it before I forgot. So you probably already know this, but in The Horse and His Boy, Cor says that "except in one would ever dream of riding a Talking Horse." so when I read that they were, I just wanted to let you know. Good story and plot twist about Evelyn escaping from the Witch!
Guest chapter 32 . 12/5/2017
Finding the one who was too much to ask for. Hey, that's a great quote!
Guest chapter 21 . 12/5/2017
I really love the idea of a kiss of true love to melt the ice in a person. :)
Guest chapter 12 . 12/4/2017
It's really interesting. I think you could make three chapters into one, because your chapters should be longer.
clare chapter 29 . 4/11/2015
what about susan!
clare chapter 18 . 4/10/2015
the dancing duel is so cute!
Guest chapter 11 . 12/22/2014
I read this story a few months ago and I really liked it and I wanted to retread it and the first chapters seemed different and didn't flow with the story is that just me personally I like it the way you had it before
Guest chapter 32 . 11/15/2014
You have a gift. This was hands down the best fanfiction I've ever read(in any category). Strong charcaters, detailed intricte plot, it was just fantastic. Thank you so much for posting this. Please don't stop writing.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/13/2014
that was awesome! and dang, I honestly think that evelyn probably looks awesome in that dress, from how you described it, though in my mind I like to think she would look better in light blue.
CahillGirl2001 chapter 14 . 7/13/2014
Good! I love being thrown for a loop! also, I honestly think that the fact that your not hinting at them sleeping together is actually a good thing. I don't like stories like that much.
2lazy2logon chapter 31 . 5/7/2014
So sweeereeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
2lazy2logon chapter 22 . 5/7/2014
Very good.
nevah nyrum chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
I just needed to say thank you. For everything that you've done, for the countless hours of work you've put in, thank you. The final "farewell" at the end of After All I wan completely bawling. It has such a ringing finality to it that it stings. I can't believe how well you wove Evelyn into the plot, as well as your use of realistic language for the time. This story had literally left a gaping hole in my chest, and I haven't figured out how to stop crying yet...
Atlafan1286 chapter 18 . 1/20/2014
I love the way you detailed her dress, it really sounds beautiful
Atlafan1286 chapter 14 . 1/20/2014
Great, I love loops!
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