Reviews for Too Much To Ask For
nevah nyrum chapter 1 . 2/4
I just needed to say thank you. For everything that you've done, for the countless hours of work you've put in, thank you. The final "farewell" at the end of After All I wan completely bawling. It has such a ringing finality to it that it stings. I can't believe how well you wove Evelyn into the plot, as well as your use of realistic language for the time. This story had literally left a gaping hole in my chest, and I haven't figured out how to stop crying yet...
Atlafan1286 chapter 18 . 1/20
I love the way you detailed her dress, it really sounds beautiful
Atlafan1286 chapter 14 . 1/20
Great, I love loops!
Atlafan1286 chapter 7 . 1/20
Yay! We finally get to meet Peter!
Atlafan1286 chapter 6 . 1/20
I think the tiger is a really cool idea
Atlafan1286 chapter 5 . 1/20
I love the mermaids
Atlafan1286 chapter 3 . 1/20
Love the story so far!
greendayjewels86 chapter 34 . 1/13
I absolutely loved this story. It was written very well. I enjoyed how well it flowed. The imagination and ingenuity I loved as well. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading your other stories.
MrsGooglyBear chapter 33 . 10/1/2013
Awesome preview! Great job. ;)
PhoenixSong2013 chapter 27 . 7/17/2013
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Guest chapter 6 . 2/21/2013
Wow, you are such a great writer! I can see what happening in my mind!
great job!
Skia andra chapter 31 . 2/17/2013
Beautifuly written by a beautiful girl ;)
Guest chapter 32 . 1/4/2013
This story is so sweet and it is really sad it came to an end. Thanks for writing such a awesome story.
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