|Reviews for Sound and Fury|
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 12 . 2/25
I loved it!
I'm actually surprised Hacker was beated...ya know, 'cause if you want to do something unexpected, he may expect that and be prepared for it; BUT if you try to do something unexpected of what Hacker thinks is gonna be your unexpected move, he may not expect it and you can beat him :3 (ok, I got lost)
Well, looks like the key to defeat evil spirits are: Danny's awesomeness and teamwork :D
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 5 . 2/24
XD When Hacker said that he had seen every fight/move/everything about Danny, I was like "Stalker much?" :P
And...he's so evil! D:
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 4 . 2/24
"Yeah, it wasn't as good as I was expecting, but was satisfying, I don't know why it's so difficult to make a perfect game adaptation"
Don't know, ask you-know-who...
Oh, and the Hacker... I'm scared! D: I have only read his description and seen a little of him and I'm already terrified! He's SO evil! ;w;
... I love him! :D (I love really evil villains, they add that...chili to the taco... -ok, that was a weird connotation (?)-)
| Totalfangirl01 chapter 2 . 2/24
Uwe Boll? Don't even mention him! D:
I saw a little part of 1 of his movies...and I swear I wanted to be shot to space like Vlad... I was never the same since then... ;w;
| brian chapter 8 . 4/6/2014
Despite his clams of intelligence, he just made the mistake every supervillion makes, he didn't just kill Danny, he wanted him to suffer. If he really wanted to destroy the earth, he should have just killed danny when he was watching the movie.
| The Specter Author chapter 6 . 12/22/2013
I don't think it was rushed at all.
| The Specter Author chapter 4 . 12/22/2013
Nice. I love The Hacker.
| Lady Merp chapter 12 . 12/7/2012
Yay you spelt my name right! :) this was a good ending it was strong and light a hard to do but nice mix if done right! I think the next story should be good I always like it when Mr. Lancer gets involved with Team Phantom! Untill next time-CC
| yoiyami chapter 12 . 12/7/2012
Not really sure how to start this off... But oh well. To be honest, your grammar needs some major work. It's difficult to read your story, and sometimes the sentence gets all mangled up and I'm not sure what you mean. Commas are great and all, but you can't just put them anywhere. There are rules to follow when it comes to using commas, and I'm sure you'd benefit if you looked up the comma rules.
As an example of what I mean: "Sam looked around, she was in a hospital room, she turned to see her arm, already in a cast, and Danny, sitting in a chair, asleep." There are five extra commas in this sentence than need be. This also would look much better as three sentences if I were to keep the original wording. Fixed, the sentence would read as "Sam looked around. She was in a hospital room. She turned to see her arm already in a cast and Danny sitting in a chair, asleep." The first two commas were deleted and changed into periods. With the commas, the sentence became a comma splice and that should generally be avoided. The next three commas were deleted because they just weren't needed. The comma before "and" doesn't need to be there since "Danny sitting in a chair, asleep" isn't an independent clause. The only time a comma should go before "and" is if the second part of the sentence is an independent clause. The last comma is perfectly fine and can stay there. I also suggest you learn about independent clauses and dependent clauses. It might help you.
You also need to put some kind of punctuation at the end of dialogue but before the closing quotation marks. Usually it'll be a comma if you add a dialogue tag, but if you don't, it would be a period. Exclamation marks and question marks don't follow that rule.
Overall, this actually seems like it could be a pretty good story, but the grammar needs some serious work. Nobody really likes reading a story when they can't understand what you mean.
| Lady Merp chapter 11 . 12/5/2012
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter but I read both that one and this one back to back! They were freaking epic! I can't wait to read the next one!-CC
| Lady Merp chapter 9 . 12/4/2012
Good chapter! I like black and purple to lol im wearing a purple jacket right now!-CC
| Lady Merp chapter 8 . 12/4/2012
Oh my Gosh ok I just finished a book that made me want to :'( and now reading this I really want to cry! Good job (no sarcasm here) the emotions were really raw here! And Hacker scares the crap out if me I hope never really invades earth!-CC
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/3/2012
When Gotham's in ashes, you have my permission to die.
| Liz chapter 7 . 12/1/2012
Great story! can't wait for the next update!
| Lady Merp chapter 7 . 12/1/2012
One point for team Phantom! I wonder what the thing that is following them is?!-CC