Reviews for Battled
ItsTerror1225 chapter 29 . 4/3
Greeeeeaaaattt I loved it omg beautifully written
AshlynDarrow582 chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Love it! Confused though...
gunsnroses007.nj chapter 29 . 8/12/2013
With the way you've written this story, it's like that's how the real version is going to end. Seriously, it's like the Casts wrote this. You've done an incredible job with this story. It's so amazing, what you've done. I liked Zoey's ending. No matter who she chose, she was destined to be with both, Stark and Aurox/Heath. Stark was the one she actually belonged with, but there's a part of Zoey that will always be connected to Heath. Stark understood that. He knew Zoey was the only girl that Heath ever loved. He knew how hard it was for Heath to let her go. Stark respected their relationship. The way you wrote Stark at the end, that's exactly how the real Stark would've acted. Also, I'm glad that Aphrodite got her happy ending. She always felt like she didn't belong because she wasn't part of the circle and then, worst of all, she was Unmarked. Then, she became a true Prophetess of Nyx and finally found her place in the vampyre world. Darius was truly right for her. He accepted all of her flaws. What others perceived as negativity, Darius saw it as something positive. She wasn't afraid to speak her mind and she didn't sugarcoat anything. She told the nerd-herd what they needed to hear, no matter how they took it. When shit went down, Aphrodite knew how to take control of the situation. She was far from being a "dumb blonde." She would have made a good High Priestess because she was more mature and smarter than Stevie Rae and Zoey, but Nyx had other plans for her. All in all, everything seemed to work out for everyone. Good job on such an incredible story. Can't wait to see what you write in the future. Hey, if you're a Twilight fan check out Wedding Day Jitters and More to Life by mcangel1976. They're both pretty awesome.
Every Rose Hurts chapter 29 . 8/11/2013
I love it but why did Stark have to die *tears**tears**tears**tears**tears**tears*
SmilesSaveLives chapter 29 . 8/10/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I THINK I'M GONNA CRY! It's...over...I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!
This universe you've created finished like it had started: utterly and truly FANTASTIC! I can't believe how far all the characters. both from the series and your own, have come, and how amazing it was to watch them grow as your awesome trilogy progressed. I absolutely love everything about the entire series, and I'm so happy that you wrote them to begin with! It's all been so amazing and wonderful and breath-taking and awesome; I'm so glad I hung on for the ride! It's really been an adventure!
Aaaaand now I MUST COMMENT ON THIS EPILOGUE! Okay, of course I HAVE TO START with the BEYOND FANTASTIC WONDERFUL STEPHAIM FLUFFYNESS! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! UJEIAGEIAGKHELOGWpoiht2hiolo4eu9iy5jy5uahua'hep't2 4y53up4y57y57aq8t q9wq63b35b4t3q
First off, I really LOVE how you went through the entire afraid-of-losing-him thing; MY HEART WAS JUST MELTING! And then you had Rephaim entire at JUST THE PERFECT MOMENT! She was praying to Nyx and asking about what she was supposed to end up with and then he just enters and is like, "With me."
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Best. Line. EVER!
AND THEN HE HAD A CUPCAKE FOR HER BIRTHDAY AND THE FROSTING AND AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I CAN'T HANDLE THIS MUCH ADORABLENESS! And then ERIK.
ERIK.
AND REPHAIM WAS MARKED AS A RED FLEDGLING AND THEN HE BECAME A VAMPYRE AND AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
Which then brings me to Zoey's majorly awesome POV! I absolutely loved how it was set in the future. and how Aphrodite was able to have children and OMG URGGWGOI?:GQPHIFQE#WGHIPQ"EGJKRGILQIGLLBFWQILHGIHH TKJGRLIHGQEIGRWLLKHLHGRLIHGGE:KGELG
This makes me very happy. Very, very happy.
And then you continue with this absolutely beautiful explanation of what had happened to all of the characters we know and love, like Shaylin and Erik, Travis and Lenobia, and Shaunee and Nisroc, WHICH MADE ME WANT TO CRY, BY THE WAY! Nisroc...dead...this makes me very sad. Very, very sad.
AND THEN YOU CONTINUE WITH HOW STARK-
STAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRK!
-HAD DIED-
DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEED
-AND THIS MADE BE WANT TO SOB. JUST A LOT A BIT.
REAL, HARD CORE SOBS.
SOBBING
THIS IS WHAT YOU CAUSED.
Sobbing.
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Moving right along, what made Stark's death bearable for me was that I knew (YOU PROMISED) that they would be seeing each other again in the Otherworld. And that he died a noble death and had a happy life with Zoey before dying and even when he was on his deathbed and I was sobbing at my computer, he was still funny and true to his character. This made it bearable, BUT THERE WAS STILL SOBBING.
And then you go and make this story capable of pleasing EVERYONE, whether they preferred Stark or Heath/Aurox. I'm actually pleased that Aurox had Heath's memories, and that he had the decency to wait until she had lived her portion of her life with Stark before he came back and told her he was a vampyre and all that. I am VERY pleased (very, very pleased), that Heath/Aurox just wanted Zoey to be happy, and that Stark wanted her to be happy too, and that Zoey wanted to be able to be happy. As much as I loved Stark and Zoey, I am really really REALLY happy with how this story ended!
You managed to wrap everything up with absolutely no loose ends (THANK YOU!), and once again, I am so happy and lucky to have been able to tag along for the ride. I absolutely LOVED every single minute of it; you are a totally awesome writer and should totally pursue a career in that if you want to! :D And with that, I say goodbye to the totally fantastic universe you've created, and, for the last time in a review for this story, AMAZING JOB!
-Smiley
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 29 . 8/10/2013
Amazing chapter! Wow. I guess a lot happens in 100 years. I found it a bit strange that the first part of the chapter happened 100 years sooner than the second part, but it all worked out I guess. I don't know if I've told you, but I've been following House of Night fanfics and I think that yours are definitely the best, or at least you're the best writer. You have good grammar, you do spell check and you know how to carry on good characters and a decent plot. I'm so sad that this series is over. You've been writing it for a long time, so I guess it had to be coming. I'll definitely read anything else that you post. LOL I guess technically Zoey ended up with Aurox in the end... ;)
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
Juliana Rose chapter 28 . 7/26/2013
Great chapter. Please update soon.
gunsnroses007.nj chapter 28 . 7/25/2013
That was a very sweet ending. Please don't wait too long to post the epilogue. I'm glad Zoey chose Stark, but I want Aurox to be happy, too. Maybe we'll see that in the epilogue. Anyway, great job, Casey.
chantal chapter 11 . 7/20/2013
in this chapter Aphrodite got to see her parent to the bake sale Aphrodite also get to see her mother who died in revealed we all know that Neferet killed her and she was the reason the mayor was angry and wanted to start a war between vampire and humans for the first time. i was wandering if she came back from death or there may be other ways she may come back that you did not put in the book we read or is every thing in the book was your imagination of how things went in the original book?
Guest chapter 27 . 6/25/2013
I love read all about house of night but the last two chapter that been send to my email was imposible to open I try severals ways but was imposible, hope you can fix the problem and I can read again.
gunsnroses007.nj chapter 27 . 6/23/2013
About time you've added another chapter! LOL. it was worth the wait, though. I knew she would choose Stark. However, it still didn't solve the problem. Now that Aurox is a fledgling, he still have a chance with Zoey, right? I don't know how it's gonna work out, but whatever. It was still an interesting chapter.
SmilesSaveLives chapter 28 . 6/22/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG OMG OMG OMG! First, I seriously LOVE how you brought the Neferet battle to a close! The word "epic" does not begin to describe! I also liked how you brought Kalona around and gave his story closure in this-nicely done. Oh, and with all the Stark POVs in this, I'm kinda hoping that she'll choose him...I don't know, but I really like him in this! AND THEN YOU GO AND PUT REPHAIM'S POV IN THERE! AHHHHH! HE'S ALL HUMAN NOW! AHHHH! OMG OMG OMG OMG! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! JUST YES, SO MUCH YES!
I can't wait for those last two chapters and the epilogue, but I am going to miss this fanfic. However, I do think you're bringing it to a close rather well, and I'm really happy with how everything is turning out. Awesome job! Please please please update soon!
-Smiley
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 28 . 6/22/2013
Amazing chapter! I never thought that Kalona could end up with Nyx, but I suppose it still works. I mean, Erebus (the one in the original series at least) was too smug for his own good. He seemed to view Nyx as more of a possession than a goddess that he loved where as Kalona just wanted to be near her again. zoey's change was also interesting. I'll be looking forward to the new chapters and what they bring.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
SmilesSaveLives chapter 27 . 6/22/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Okay, WOW! EPIC! AHHHHHHHH! THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING! WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW! AH! WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 27 . 6/22/2013
AMAZING CHAPTER! Wow... that is dramatic! I love it though! Hopefully there are no more casualties. I forget who died... but I'm sure we'll all find out.
Keep up the amazing work! ;) (:
Tarah xXx
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