|Reviews for Naruto: Wielder of Nuibari|
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/14
I love this story it's amazing what you've done with the story and all overall my #1 fanfic of all time this is what I live for tbh I want to see how it turns out when sasuke and Sakura see narutos face
| sezaren chapter 15 . 5/6
loved it op naruto kinda ı wonder how is their faces will look like when konoha lear that the masked swordsman was naruto
| hello chapter 1 . 4/19
| ZenakuOkami chapter 15 . 4/13
I must say that I have had more fun reading this story than I have had with any other well done and I would like to ask that you continue to make more and more chapters and if you would be willing please accept a few story ideas from myself if so just send me a PM
| KageForce chapter 15 . 3/31
Dud its been MONTHS come on i want to see this story completed
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/30
S. A cool idea for a justu would be tI like put some water on the narubi have him lodge it into someone's stomach and have him control the water to crush there internal organs also you should have him use wind ninjusu as well think of all the nasty things he could do with that
| silgain chapter 15 . 3/28
give me more naruto and ino scene, please..
| varok chapter 15 . 3/27
woooo que buen espero conti xD!
| Patricia.sandell chapter 15 . 3/22
OMG! I haven't read anything this good and exciting, different, in months! I applaude you. Serially. This is great. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
| coolchick87 chapter 15 . 3/10
I love your story please update it real soon.
| REDdeadKYUUBI chapter 15 . 3/4
Im really liking the story please update soon. Also I was wondering if you were going to give naruto a lightning affinity. That word work really well with the wire and water.
| snowyassas1n chapter 15 . 2/26
I personally like where this story is going and I cant wait to see the next chapter as for plot line development I really hope you don't intend on following canon akatsuki killing all but two jinchuriki as I personaly like fu. after this mission I say you should send naruto to kiri for a mission just to resolve the case with him being just like a kiri shinobi, what I mean is have him meet the mizukage and see about making him an honorary swordsmen of the mist making a alliance with kiri because of him whether or not you use the civil war is debatable as I personally would like it you did and have naruto take out a large porton and earning a reputation and a bingo book entry with a moniker like the (Ryūketsu no hōsei ātisuto) literally meaning the bloody sewing artist
| TheExilez chapter 15 . 2/6
Great job with this! There's the occasional typo and misuse of words (wrong forms, such as 'right' vs. 'rite', etc.), but nothing too bad. The main problem is misspelled words that can cause confusion; I'm not sure if you have a beta reader or a program like Word that let's you spell check, but there are a number of these mistakes. Just a thought.
I'm glad to see you're sticking true to Naruto's "semi-dark" nature you're giving him. I just wonder if your goal is to keep him balanced in that semi-dark state, or push him to dark/evil Naruto (which it appears to be if he's intentionally trying to harm his allies). It's your story, but I personally feel it would progress better if you keep him in the balanced semi state, where's he's not trying to hurt Saku/Sasu/Kaka, but instead just ignoring them and being cruel; mostly making it obvious that he's cutting ties with them socially, but still understands his Profession requirements.
Definitely a Follow though, so keep the updates coming!
(If you do end up looking for beta readers, let me know!)
| Foxes r Cool chapter 15 . 2/6
I totally enjoy this. It has everything i like in a good fanfiction and nothing i hate Keep up the good work.
| Naruto Lover chapter 15 . 1/20
Congrats, into getting in college. I think you did a very good job recreating the fight with Sasori and Naruto's own thoughts, it was very enjoyable. Just like you said can't wait for the next chapter to see what tricks Naruto has up his sleeves and how Sakura and Chiyo react to them.