|Reviews for Chrono Trigger: Priestess of Elements|
| Legendary Biologist chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
As a prologue, this is a good start; short but has pointed out the conflict. Plotwise, it sounds interesting.
Magus is as curious as always, which means that you've shown his characterization, so good job!
Word choice is beautiful, as the words kept the seriousness of this story. :)
One thing I'd like to say is, this chapter is lacking of description. Maybe you can elaborate how Magus found the ice mass? Where is Magus now? How does the environment look like?
Magus began a magic spell. He didn't know what kind of release spell to use, but he tried all he could until one would work. Unfortunately, none did.
-This paragraph is more telling than showing, adding the description the spells that Magus had cast to free the girl can eliminate this problem.
Grammar is solid, but there are few spelling typos. A reread can solve the typos I believe.
I hope that my review helps and doesn't sound too critical. I look forward to reading more! :)