|Reviews for Lose Yourself|
| Mysteria chapter 12 . 4/4/2015
Shame this story never was completed, I've found myself throughout the years peeking in to see if any update happened to no avail :(
| Pinochet chapter 12 . 7/22/2010
This is not a well-rounded critique. Forgive me.
Oh, where are you? It's been a good 7 years and you haven't finished your story; I am forced to assume the worst. I don't even want to elaborate. Please, come back.
Your story is wonderful, and I'm rather addicted to it. I went through all 12 chapters like they were candy. I wanted to see Dave and Lisa end up together! I thought this would be the final chapter!
Obviously you've moved on from your transitory News Radio obsession, but I have not. I need you to finish this story. It is imperative. I'm waiting for that one sarcastic Dave remark that shows his reform. But alas, you have gone.
So again: Come back! May this message reach you wherever you are, draw you to your feet, and call you back to this website. I wait with bated breath.
| princessdeleon chapter 12 . 3/22/2009
ok so i know this story is over 6 years old, but was that the end? i really enjoyed the story but i wasn't sure if that was teh closure i think the story needed, but i wasnt sure if it was really the end anyhow. I know its been quite a long time and I am a first time reviewer but if you weren't done i realy think you should continue
| Frogorn chapter 12 . 10/19/2005
I love this story! I'm a big Dave fan and I like to see how he copes with his life. Please, hurry up and continue on with this story because you have a great start and it keeps your audience wanting more
| da-super-dude chapter 12 . 9/8/2005
Please continue, i like the pairing, and besides i can't wait any longer !
| Mimi0204 chapter 12 . 9/1/2004
Wait. Is that it? What happens to Dave and Lisa? This is such a good story, this can't be the end.
| Emily chapter 12 . 7/6/2004
This is such a good NewsRadio story! Please update soon because I'd really like to see how things end up! (Dave and Lisa! Dave and Lisa!) Anyway, good job so far :)
| cantlivewoutHawkMash chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
will u be writing anymore of these kinda stories about Dave? cause they are REALLY...EXTREMELY... good! please write more stories! do you happen to have an archive or a website for your fan fiction?
| emma chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
It's been a year and still no update! I wanna see how this concludes SO bad!
| Jeckle1 chapter 12 . 5/14/2004
So are you ever going to update this? It's the best written serious NewsRadio story i have ever read.
| cantlivewoutHawkMash chapter 12 . 4/19/2004
Can ya write more stories about Dave please? PLEASE!
| peter and the wolf chapter 12 . 4/18/2004
So I guess this never gets finished? Or was that the end? I just find it hard to believe that that was the end, being that you said nothing about it being the last chapter. I love this story! Will you never finish it?
| peter and the wolf chapter 11 . 4/18/2004
HAHA! I just have to interrupt my reading here to say that Matthew thinking that Dave was a drug addict really struck me as funny for some reason! Heheh, anyway, I loved the chapter...poor Kristina..but most of all, poor Lisa!
| peter and the wolf chapter 6 . 4/18/2004
Oh wow...this story is just amazing! I've only recently started watching NewsRadio, due to the fact that I'm a huge Dave F. fan, and somehow this story is endearing me to the characters even more. I love the fact that this story is so carefully written, with no typos, well-worded sentences, a seemingly well-rounded knowledge of the subjects at hand, and lots of detail. I am very impressed, and I will now continue my reading with chapter 7. [by the way, I loved the kith plug!]
| jessica chapter 12 . 2/12/2004
GREAT STORY! MY GOD! i was thinking about your story throughout the whole day in my classes! WILL THERE BE ANY MORE? I LOVE DAVE!