This has to be the most original Pride and Prejudice fic I've ever read, and I love it.

The story was mainly about Elizabeth and Darcy - I see no reason to give Catherine “the last word”, it really didn’t fit. Other than that, a very unique and well written version of a Pride and Prejudice variation.

Great story. Thanks!

I don't like this Darcy , he is really weak plus how he refers to his and Elizabeth future sons , he never say our future sons , he said Elizabeth sons, like if was nothing to do with him.

Love your story. I love it when the persons are OOC.

Mr Wickham is such a bastard. I dont like him at all. I hope he get what he deserves. I will continue reading. Thank you for this story.

I was just wondering if mr Wickham was OOC, but this far it seems as he is as he ever was. I must read on and se what happens. Thank you for this lovely story.

Help looking for a pride and prejudice variation story I can’t remember if I read on fanfic or kindle unlimited What I can remember of the story is Darcy is refused by Elizabeth but decides to pursue a courtship which Elizabeth continues to refuse (sort of becomes a game between them). All Darcy’s friends and most of his family come to Hertfordshire, nearly all find love On of Darcys friend/not friend a baron or something likes Mary she begins by giving him no heed then tells him she will only marry him if they elope- which with the help of her father her lets her believe they eloped i think his name is something like sir Sebastian or other. I think their is an actual elopement attempt by Lydia and Wickham but it was confusio as they didn’t actually attempt it Darcy and Elizabeth end up marring instead in granta green Sorry this all i remember dont know if i added bit from different story but it is quite humorous, and has a lot of hijinks etc

Really liked the realizations you wrote Darcy coming to on the carriage ride and again after his meeting with Locke. His deep seated anxiety feed his loyalty and desire to care for others while sometimes blinding him to the consequences of such actions. Cleverly written.

Thank you for another amazing story ️️️

Ohhhh...too adorable, and fun, and exciting...and I just loved this!
Thanks for sharing

I really enjoyed your story. I liked your alternative plot and character development. I would have like more of Jane and The Cornels relationship too. I know you wrote this some years ago now, but am glad to have found it. I hope you write more P&P.

PS: PoirotH is totally exaggerating. There are a few typos, yes, but this does not make it difficult to read at all. Don't take the comment to heart.

Wow! This story is a masterpiece! Thank you for sharing it. I love your plot, characters and all the feels you are bringing across. How could it take 8 years for me to find this gem?

You have interesting ideas, pity you didn't beta the text and it's practically illegible at places. I've lost patience with trying to decipher what you wanted to say, so I'll stop reading here. I am glad you seem to have a lot of avid readers and grateful reviews, because you obviously put a lot of time and effort into writing this. Pity you didn't go that extra mile and checked the text before posting.