|Reviews for Spark of Change|
| Daniratoe chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Ili like the idea of this story. I want to see what are you going to do with it, so keep writing!
| 462472575745ytryeu chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Great story. I like the plot so far and I hope it develops more as you keep writing. :) Some advice though...
Make sure to revise your story before posting to make sure you don't have any hidden mistakes. Check your punctuation as well. I noted some places where there should have been a period instead of a comma and vice versa. Also, I think each quotation/speech line should be a separate paragraph. After the speech line, if you want a description, make it a new paragraph. You can completely ignore this, considering people may not be as ridiculously picky as I am...:P
Once again, great story. Please update soon, I want to read more.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I think your story is really good so far and hopefully there is more on the way