|Reviews for Harry LIAG|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Your math is off; it should be -166,000 instead of -136,000. Somewhere you gave him 30,000 too many points. Maybe 10,000 for meeting Tonks, Remus and Mad-Eye, or perhaps 30,000 for saving his cousin from the Dementors and being found not Guilty in the Trial?
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
why would an owl emporium have a snake?
| Sin Ouroboros chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
This is really good but when is harry going to spend his points? It seems like he isn't ever going to spend them except for the first level up
| sachin6291 chapter 3 . 9/10/2014
You do realize that this is really annoying, more so when you do it at least twice per chapter. It is really not nessesary
Challenge completed! Throughout the game there will be challenges that will give you extra points.
Challenge: Ravenclaw lead: get fifty points for Ravenclaw.
Exp: 1,000 5 Transfiguration
Basic Points to spend: 50
Points to spend: 10
Parseltongue: level 6 50 points
Magic senses: Level 4 30 points
Animagus: Level 3 20 points
Potions master: Level 9 80 points
Alchemist: Level 5 40 points
Enchanter: Level 4 30 points
Seer: Level 3 20 points
Warder: Level 15 140 points
Curse Breaker: Level 3 20 points
Trap maker: Level 3 20 points
Beast master: Level 5 40 points
Leader: Level 3 20 points
Dark arts: Level 15 140 points
Financer: Level 10 90 points
Wand Maker: Level 3 20 points
Eidetic memory: Level 3 20 points
Quick reader: Level 2 10 points
Gardener: Level 8 70 points
Chef: Level 3 20 points
Defense: Level 10 90 points
Charms: Level 20 90 points
Runes: Level 10 90 points
Transfigurations: Level 15 140 points
Total Level: 13
To next level: 1,600
Exp gotten: 18,500
Perks to spend: 11
Ward maker/breaker: full
Quick Ward: full
Novice warder: full
Object warder: full
House warder: locked
Investment: Locked level 15 speech
More ingredients: Locked-level 15 alchemist
Dark animals: 2/5
Blood magic: 3/10
All serpents: locked-level 15
Familiars: Locked-level 15
Ingredient Power: 1/5
Total level: 16
Exp required: 8,100
Exp gotten: 34,000
| Navn Ukjent chapter 2 . 7/2/2014
The concept isn't bad, but the execution is lacking.
Posting the wall of stats so many times in a chapter is NOT the way to go. It doesn't help that the formating is bad, the various choices Harry makes are not easily visible and many of the skills/perks have no explaination.
| DropDeadRomantic chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
Great! Can't wait for more.
| Dreamless-Sleep777 chapter 2 . 6/5/2014
Right, do you need to repeat Harry's complete stats over and over? Please only show what is relevant (what changes) and Harry's reactions and reasoning for the change.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/14/2014
dude still about half your chapter was dedicated to the levelup. what you may be able to do is just give a summary of his skills at the end of each chapter, and then when a levelup happens you could just 5 to enchantiong 3 to runes. Like that
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/14/2014
dude why is freaking half your chapter dedicated to levelling up, it takes up nearly half of the entire chapter, i mean i just skip past most of them so who cares
| godess bubbles chapter 4 . 4/28/2014
I just love this story! though its hard trying to keep up with the ones he leveled like seer or warder you know...Update soon!
| Dracowoman chapter 4 . 4/27/2014
good job, please update
| Elysium Phenex chapter 4 . 4/22/2014
Pleaseeeeeeee update this it is great! i have never seen this done and i reallly like it :D
| Alex2909 chapter 4 . 3/21/2014
wonder what else harry will change
| doubledamn chapter 4 . 2/23/2014
Now THAT was a very, VERY clever way to use the Life Debt. Very impressive.
I'm surprised that never came up in canon though.
This is great so far, can't wait for more.
| doubledamn chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
Nice. Though I would've exploited that a little. Save slot 2 before sorting, then save slot 1 after sorting. then load slot 2 and twice and pick the other houses before loading slot 1. Unlock more perks if he ever has to do this again.
What Tracey said seemed very reminiscent of a certain Mr. Bueller:
'A person should not believe in an 'ism' he should believe in himself."