Reviews for Complications
Obsessivebookworm14 chapter 9 . 7/17
A very emotional and touching story. I love the slow transition in Valerie's thought process. It really conveyed the inner turmoil that she was feeling throughout the whole thing. Her relationship with Danny - both as best-friend Fenton and enemy Phantom - were realistically written, and both helped to highlight her obsession with ghosts. It really highlighted how she was no better than the ghosts that she hunted.

Once again, stunning job.
Hebi R chapter 9 . 6/12
Very enjoyable; I only wish there was more.
The Patient One chapter 9 . 6/9
I've been looking for a Fan Fiction that explored this particular event for a while. Perfectly done, I daresay.
HaiJu chapter 5 . 5/28
Ah, things just got interesting! I wanna say more about the fic, but I'll wait till the end...

Serulium chapter 7 . 4/16
Love this story like crazy!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/9
This is pretty awesome, I've already become a fan of your work! Guessing this is a reveal fic? :P
Sally.yang chapter 9 . 3/22
Good story.
too-much-inspiration chapter 9 . 2/16
Valerie makes for a potentially very useful ally when she finds out the important details, and she certainly seems to be trending in that fashion in this story. There was perhaps a bit too much rambling and thinking in this, but not so much as to detract from the value and approach to this reveal scenario. It is interesting to think about just how much even finding out of the existence of half-ghost beings quickly leads to a full reveal of who those beings actually are. It is hard to ignore the signs when the idea is planted, but easy to deny until that is the case. Thank you for posting!
8DemigodRunner8 chapter 9 . 2/12
WOW this story was amazing! This is one of, if not THE, best Valerie-finds-out story I've read! Keep writing, 'cause you're doing an outstanding job! It was perfectly paced and interesting the whole way through, and the emotions and way Val found out, and all of it was perfect!
LunarCatNinja chapter 9 . 1/8
This is a great story! I really enjoyed reading about Valerie's change in perspective all the way until she found out the truth!
The Fruit and the Loopy chapter 9 . 11/15/2014
Quite a good revealation story - the characters weren't OOC (thank the gods,) and you got around Valerie's feelings of ambiguity quite well. I found her indecision with Klemper and whether or not to shoot him quite profound - I would have never thought of it myself. It revealed much about her unwillingness to do harm to those who never meant it and put into perspective just how much her world was flipped on its head.
Nikki Pond chapter 9 . 10/26/2014
One of the best DP fanfics I have read about Danny and Valerie.

;) U did well, and especially the revelation. I also love how u put Valerie's thoughts about Danny Phantom and Fenton.
IvyVine6 chapter 9 . 8/1/2014
Whew. That was a heck of a wondrous story. Your style of writing is just...flawless.
IvyVine6 chapter 8 . 8/1/2014
This story is seriously jacked up with feels. I can't get enough of it.
IvyVine6 chapter 7 . 7/31/2014
Oh, man. The way this story is unfolding is utter brilliance. Of what I've read, all of the other Valerie revelation fics, whether fully or only partially a reveal, were never this heartfelt. Coupled with the suspenseful humor this story has, it's really turned out to something outstanding.
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