Reviews for Don't Wake Me Up
Lightening Maiden30 chapter 1 . 1/9
Love your story.
Kyokkou chapter 15 . 12/6/2016
I'm so confused about how I should feel about this. I want Elsira and Legolas to be together, but I still feel bad for Alister. I mean, I know that they've had feelings for one another for a long time, but it just feels like they're helping each other heal/cope with the recent events. All of that said, I *still* want them to end up together of course. At the same time I don't want there to be tragedy for Alister. Blarg. I don't think I'm going to get these feelings/thoughts properly sorted for a few chapters.

Rant aside, I'm extremely interested in seeing where you decide to take this story and I'll be looking forward to another update.
LegGree chapter 15 . 11/27/2016
Loveeeee it! This was written perfectly! You captured the moment so well!

Please keep it up - I'm so hooked on this story :D
Guest chapter 15 . 11/27/2016
Thanks for the great update. I really enjoyed this chapter, it was well written and I could almost feel the tension between the two characters.
Princess of Mirkwood2 chapter 14 . 11/11/2016
Write more soon please.
ME chapter 13 . 10/3/2016
LegGree chapter 12 . 8/25/2016
LoVe iT! Please update again! I love the quick updates! Usually if there is too much time between updates on a story i get lost and confused between stories but i am loving this one! I'm worried about whats going to happen between her and Legolas now, i really ship them and still want them to be together.
I also wanted to say your characters are really strong and feel like they should be there. They feel like they are part of the world where as some fics, their characters are really disjointed.

Keep up the great worrkkkkk xxx
BronzeWolf336 chapter 11 . 8/23/2016
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Lordequinox chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
Sorry... I mean Something is wrong with the text on chapter 2. It should be obvious once you actually look at the chapter.
Lordequinox chapter 2 . 8/20/2016
Someone is wrong with the text on chapter 2.
PrettyRecklessLaura chapter 8 . 6/23/2016
Can't wait for more!
harrgn chapter 8 . 2/16/2016
My favorite part in this story is when Elsira said's "YOU WILL NOT TOUCH HIM!" and turning to face the oncoming horde. Can you finish it please.
Mystic Archer Horse chapter 7 . 1/22/2016
I enjoyed catching up. Sounds really good so far. I think you writing in what she feels add more depth. Even writing her insecurities. Many writers I've read on here seem to lack writing the OC's feelings completely or just the negative ones. Writing what the character's feel, even OCs, give more depth. Especially the negative ones because it shows imperfection-something that everyone is.
xcislyfe22 chapter 2 . 12/16/2015
Okay, this chapter is even MORE typical and unoriginal than the last. Beautiful girl joins the fellowship? Check. Tries using weapons, and immediately masters it? Check. Instantly and unrealistically catches Legolas' eye? Check. Girl turns out to be an all powerful being? Check. Also, you're not providing reasoning for your OCs actions. Why did she out of NOWHERE decide to join the fellowship? Bc she was meant to do something in middle earth, isn't really a good reason. Also, why did no one object to her joining, or at least say ANYTHING about it? This fanfic is turning out to be really typical and unrealistic, and no different from the other hundred tenth walker fanfics.
xcislyfe22 chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Your writing is good, but this is already a really basic Legolas/OC tenth walker, girl falls into middle earth story. This fanfic doesn't seem different from all the other hundreds. This story would be way better if you came up with a little originality...? But then again, I am only on chapter one. It just bothers me how typical this is turning out to be...
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