|Reviews for Don't Wake Me Up|
| MaxRideandPercyJackson4ever chapter 12 . 1/21
| MaxRideandPercyJackson4ever chapter 3 . 1/19
| jadedflower chapter 12 . 1/6
I just want to say thank you for posting this story. I've really enjoyed it, and I can't wait to read your next chapter. Of everything that happened in the first 12 chapters, I think the only thing I was a little bit confused about was what was going on with Elsira's parents (whether they were dead or not). Besides that, the pace of the plot works really well, and you have a good balance of dialogue and description. I'm excited to read more - keep up the good work!
| elfcat chapter 12 . 1/4
Oh my gosh that was beautiful. I'm crying right now! And that's saying a lot because I don't cry easily, not anymore at least. I don't care about the length, it's the content that makes a story, and your's is brilliant. Thank you so much for the update!
| Da.Hybrid.Queen chapter 12 . 1/4
Belanor is gone, nooo! At least Elsira is free. Now she can return to the fellowship.
| Katrina3064 chapter 12 . 1/4
Oh. My. God. This story is absolutely amazing! I've read tons of LegolasXOC stories, but this one is the only one by far to give me what I want. Legolas seems so IN character and, for some reason, it's hard to find stories like that. I also LOVE Elsira! In my five year of reading fan fictions (and believe me, I've read a lot) I have never once been able to shake my head and agree with the characters in the story.
I also hate it when writers change the original story and add things, but I wish this story had happened as LotR instead of the original. You're writing is nothing short of perfect and I cannot wait until the next chapter! By about chapter two or there, I had already made up my mind to review. When I got to the last few chapters, I was so sad because I didn't have anymore to read.
Please update soon! I will probably have a mini heart attack when and do a celebratory dance when you do. Sorry I know that this was a very long review, but I just HAD to let you know what I thought about this amazing story!(:
| mjb930 chapter 12 . 1/3
Love it! Please update soon!
| Teddy bear 007 chapter 12 . 1/3
Keep going! At least she's not a hobbit, and has to eat twice as much:) imagine that!:D
| mimichamp chapter 12 . 1/3
I am absolutely in love with this story! Please please please update soon!
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/3
I love it
| Dark Lady of Rivendell chapter 12 . 1/3
Loved this chapter, I won't deny that I am overjoyed for her to be free from that awful place, I am also glad that she is on her way back to the rest of the Fellowship, although I cannot wait to see Gimli's reaction as well as Aragorn's, I am somewhat reluctant to see one of my most favorite character, Legolas react to her leaving and her tale. I however can not wait to see her surprised reaction of Gandalf...hoping that is who will be waiting to surprise her.
I cannot wait to see where you take these characters and I am eager for you to update, please hurry for I fear the suspense may kill me. LOL
| lotrlover2931 chapter 12 . 1/3
What?! I was all geared up for the next chapter... I love it, Update soon please.
| Marpessa Apollo chapter 9 . 1/1
Okay, I just have to add something. Where on Earth did you get that Elvish translation? Because that is certainly not elvish. That's at least not Sindarin, maybe you have a Quenyen translation? There are two types of Elvish; Sindarin and Quenya, and Quenya is rarely spoken during this age. Here is something in Sindarin (the Elvish that is spoken during this age): Pedin i phith in aníron, a nin ú-cheniathagir. The language you used sounds more like Portuguese mixed with Elvish, lol. I've also noticed a couple other things as well concerning Tolkien lore. I can't think of it now, but I will enlighten you if I come across anything else.
While I'm here, I may as well tell you what I think of this story so far. (Fair warning, I'm long winded, so prepare yourself). Overall, I think your writing is done fairly well. I think I have a small problem with character development and a bit of the plot concerning Elsira. Concerning the character development, I feel like there is quite a bit missing. You've just kind of plopped her in the story without much background. Yeah, she's from North Carolina and owns a book shop and her friends name is Leah, and we know some about her personality from before, but she is lacking depth. I might not be making any sense at all, but I just don't really know how to put it into words. She seems like a mixed character, where I think I know who she is, then she does something completely out of character (Even when she did basically have a multiple personality). Even though she and I may be a lot a like (enjoys books, introvert, et cetera) I don't fell like I can relate to her. All in all, she is lacking something. This also kind of goes with Elsira's plot too. I don't see any correlation to it, it's just all over the place. I don't see much connection with her and the Fellowship quite yet. When I read a 10th walker, I don't want to see the Followship plus one, I want to see them all completely connected, OC and all. (This is a matter of opinion, but I'm not a big fan of when she goes back to her previous life for a while, I don't think it fits in with the plot. If you were to put her into her previous life for a time, I'd say go all out. Don't just put her there for a short time then rip her out.) This is just a suggestion, but when you are questioning something about Tolkien lore, feel free to ask me. Maybe you know just as much about the world of Tolkien as I do, but personally I have seen some holes in that aspect. When a Lord of the Rings fanfiction has the correct lore to it's world, I think it's infinitely better. Not that yours is bad, I've just noticed a few things. Concerning the world of Tolkien, it's so easy to make mistakes because the world he created is so vast, but if you have any questions feel free to ask. Ugh, I'm sorry this is getting so long but one more thing. I'm not feeling a deep connection her and Legolas, I see that they're gooey-eyed for each other, but I don't feel much of a deep romantic connection as of yet.
Okay, okay. I'm done. I hope you found this helpful!
| Dark Lady of Rivendell chapter 11 . 1/1
OMG! How could you leave me hanging like this, I don't say this about a lot of stories, but I cannot wait for you to update...please, please hurry, please! :)
| elfcat chapter 11 . 12/31/2013
oh my goodness this is amazing! Brilliant work! I love your ideas and how intriguing they are you seem to know just how to write in such a way so it's paced very well, not rushed yet not sloth like! I will await the next chapter anxiously!