Reviews for Empty Spaces
caribbeanblues chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
This is just... Perfect.
Saadia1994 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Awesome story hun
Well done
Fangalitious chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
I love this! The unforced chemistry between Lily and James is almost palpable. Write more James and Lily stuff, soon!
aahmumtaz chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Sooooo good . Just wow. I just love all of your jily fics.
E.D.Silverwater chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
LOVED IT
looneyshazza chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Perfection.
Apalapucian chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
This is just very flawlessly done. Ugh I love it so much; you write beautifully.
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Awwwwwwwww
awakeatnight chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
This was very cute, I especially loved this part-
"and she saw them change before her eyes, right then, these men in boy skins, brave and stupid and loyal"
because it really put you there with Lily, seeing these boys, all their actions, in an entirely different light. Great job!
Swallow in the Cloud chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Sweet
m3ggi3 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
you beautiful, beautiful person.
Julia chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
This was really well done. I loved how in character it felt.
Lara chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
That's beautiful. I only wish I knew what came next. Fantastic writing, very impressive.
Madame BonBons chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
This is absolutely beautiful.
I love how you structured this, it made it absolutely brilliant.
This is fabulous. I don't actually know what else to say, but your characterisations were great and it just flowed very nicely and I love it.
Well done.
chasinglaughter chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
beautiful as always. this was my favorite line: "It shakes her, the thousand ways the night could've gone, the thousand ways a life is changed by a single moment of time, the thousand ways to look at a person and see a thousand different things looking back." hope you write more soon!
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