You should keep making John Kelly

John is the defacto leader of all the Spartans it don matter what rank they are it was talked about in the movie they made about reach

What a great story :D

I really like how this story is pretty much Kelly's POV of the events of Halo 4. It would have been really cool if they were there in the game

You're interactions of blue team aren't believable in the slightest...

This story was very enjoyable and most of all realistic. Human relationships are the primary goal after all and thanks for showing Kelly the proper respect in this. Once again good work

I forgot all about John getting hit with the composer. Damm good thinking on your part on keeping Kelly back. She would of died for nothing

Reading this makes me remember how badass it was for chief to defy that order. Its a shame that Halo 5 was so terrible

I liked this chapter. The true depth of John and Kelly's relationship really showed itself here

Why is she so heartless, she can’t even admit that Cortana was there for John during the events in the games and that she saved him. Maybe she thinks if Sapphire as a pet, to John Cortana is a friend just like how Miranda, Johnson, and maybe Keyes was. She gets mad at someone else for calling John delusional, but she says the same. Saying he hallucinating, she said the same with Didacts voice and was proven wrong twice with evidence of the Librarian helping John. Like I don’t understand why she would disapprove their bond.

This whole retelling of Halo 4 is amazing! For someone who has always been a John/Kelly supporter since I read the Nylund novels, this is perfection! How Halo 4 should have been!

you just made me cry!

this absolutely beautiful

u do know that master chief of the navy is higher than cammander right?

It would be awesome if you did a story about the in between of Halo 4 and 5 like Kelly and the chief get married or something.