Reviews for The Dragon of Metal
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2017
Oh! That's story is great! I love it! Can I translate it?
Jack of Vines chapter 24 . 3/7/2017
This story is great! I love it! Can I translate it?
silvern-cookie chapter 24 . 12/23/2015
don't say it's a bad ending, I think it's a great ending! fitting even! and it's a bad idea to read it with the piano version of lilium from elven lied behind it... sniff
Sora Tayuya chapter 13 . 11/16/2015
Money and ice cream. Little is better. A shame Raimundo had to miss out.
Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 11/11/2015
That was a funny insult. I can't believe I hadn't thought of that.
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 24 . 6/30/2014
This story was wonderful. Great job!
Cuddly chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Let's just say, I totally was thinking of this idea.

And when I saw that summary as I scrolled through the selection, I froze.

"Someone else thought this would be awesome...and made a story...FUCKYEAH"
fabledfate chapter 18 . 1/25/2014
TheWhiteJewel chapter 24 . 8/10/2013
Not a fan of JackKim but I thought this was interesting so I picked it up. I enjoyed it a lot, it is definitely among the better XS fanfics, despite the idea of Jack being the Dragon of Metal been done a million times, it was refreshing. :)

Will there be an epilogue?
Jac the Shadow chapter 24 . 8/7/2013
Yes, Kimiko. Jack walks into the ship with a fleet of stairs and you flip into it with fire. Yeah, he's a total show off! XD

It's nice to see this story completed, good stories like this deserve it!
3radicating-Fat3 chapter 20 . 8/6/2013
This is such an awesome story. I can't wait to see how this turns out :D
Insanityisessential chapter 24 . 7/31/2013
Really good!
Moonheart13 chapter 24 . 7/22/2013
Ahhh, thank you for the shout-out! X3
I actually liked the ending. All endings don't have to be grand, I think the best endings are ones like these. Sort, sweet, and too the point. Magnificent story, I quite enjoyed it.
Gameguy20100 chapter 23 . 7/5/2013
This is great really man

Sad to see it go actually no its not my favorite part of a story is the ending otherwise it becomes an overwritten slog and is just boring.

Have you considered a sequel?
Insanityisessential chapter 23 . 6/20/2013
Awe I feel so special(: you have done so well with this! Are you sure it has to end so soon? Anyways update soon because its super amazing. (Btw I really wish you could hear the way I was saying this in my head. It would make much more sense lol)
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