Reviews for Revenge
Your mom chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Sounds like a two year old wrote this
Guest chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
a good start..cant wait to know what will happen..
although the spelling errors could be looked into...
EmmaBaby90 chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
Personally I would keep it as third person or as a first person story. Reading this got me confused because you were jumping from character to character. I would also put more of a plot of why he wants her. Like for example; he is using her as leverage for revenge. so he has to keep her with him and alive. Or say he needs her as bait for something. or that someone visited him at the hospital and threatened her and now he has to go and save her so by taking her out of town is his way of saving her.
BW4eva chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I wanna know what's going to happen next.
Jenny1323 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Keep updating