Reviews for Ben 10: Unveiling The Truth
jasongd chapter 2 . 12/2/2016
Good story I hope you will continue this
can't wait for next chapter Bwen Forever
BenMan2005 chapter 2 . 7/19/2016
I'd really love to see a sequel, maybe a chapter 3? Really love the character development. Maybe add the father in for a bit of gay porn towards the end with Grandpa Max. Then there could be a massive gay orgy at the end. That would really satisfy me. Thank you for writing this great novel.
Brionna1117 chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Omg are you going to write more
DarkestDepts chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
WHAT THE HECK MAN! that was the worst ending of a chapter ever. and since when did the parents showed up. you didn't really explain that. and plus you had a lot of misspellings in their. next time MAKE IT HAVE MORE SENSE IN IT PLEASE!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
When is chapter 3 gonna come out
Exoticanimal10 chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
OMG!. Continue it now! xd
doc boy chapter 2 . 12/7/2012
Oh boy... when he pushed her on the bed I thought they really were gonna do it. It's a good thing they didn't though. I'm looking foward to the next chapter
doc boy chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Well this is not exactly what I expected. The fact that Max accepts it like that is a little unrealistic and that he thought they will 'do it' while he was gone. These are ten year old kids. Such a thing happening is unrealistic and wouldn't make sense. Never the less it's a cute story and I'm looking foward to reading the rest
Guest chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
cant wait to read the rest soon :D
heeromew4113 chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
The Chapters are a little short but it a good story I jpoe you keep it up