|Reviews for Jonathon Fairchild-Greymark|
| 100gamesvictor chapter 2 . 3/26/2013
I like the story, I like the plot, but maybe you could work on getting a bit more in depth in the writing and development. Also, Izzy wouldn't care if he was turning good. Too little to late. He killed her brother and I think she should hate him until something huge happens to change that.