Reviews for Let Go
vogueinnocencebeauty chapter 5 . 2/19/2013
Awh this is such a sad chapter :( I feel so bad for Gordie.
Duck chapter 5 . 2/11/2013
That's so sad.
CherryPezFoo chapter 5 . 1/21/2013
Love love love love love! Ugh why do you have to be such a good writer!:)
Duck chapter 4 . 12/28/2012
Ooh, please continue!
vogueinnocencebeauty chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
AWH! Jessica and Gordie for the win! So sad just to think what's gonna happen in the future :(
CherryPezFoo chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
Yess! Vern loves me!;D And ooooooh, can't wait for the reaction in the treehouse! Is this girl trouble?: hmmm. loved it as per usual:)
celestialstarynight chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
You found them all dead, with David standing over their torn bodies. As you run from the tree house, screaming, two boys, one who looks a lot like Teddy, run toward it, screaming at the top of their lungs. Another boy, in a coat worthy of a fashion victim, runs after them with a dog following at his heals. The Frog brothers climb up the ladder with stakes in hand, and Sam aims his crossbow through the window. Nanook barks at the bottom of the ladder as Sam fires the bolt from the crossbow. There's an otherworldly scream from the treehouse and then the Frog brothers come down, both are covered in a ridiculous amount of red slime and Edgar is missing his stake.
"Don't worry, kid," Edgar says to you. "Those blood suckers wont bother you anymore."
"Sorry we couldn't save your friends," Allan adds.
"Hey, man, are you okay?" Sam asks you, concerned.
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I swear I didn't mean to write all that. It just sorta came out...
Merry Christmas Allan!
-Sammy
Duck chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
This next chapter should be good.
Duck chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
Aw young love.
Duck chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
This soundded so tragic yet so reall.
CherryPezFoo chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
Awwh, silly little boys with silly little crushes! Hehe, we all grow up too fast:)
vogueinnocencebeauty chapter 3 . 12/1/2012
Naww this chapter was so cute! You've wrote the characters really well :D Hahaa this did indeed made me laugh and I did enjoy the last chapter thank you :) amazing chapter and hope you update soon, this stories going good :D
Charlotte chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
Hey it's VogueCharlotteVogue... I forgot to sign in XD
Anyway, loved this chapter and love how they met! You write the characters so well in this! Awesome work and hope you can update soon:)
CherryPezFoo chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
Awwh! Gordo has a crushh! It makes it kinda sad though, to know their not going to be together forever:(! Buh buh buh buh buh, im loving it!:) Felt the need to advertise McDonalds there:]
celestialstarynight chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
wow... GORDON LACHANCE! you horrible father! how could you blame that little baby for your wife's death! and don't try to pretend otherwise! I know that's what you're thinking!
interesting story Allan, thought provoking and deep...
-Sammy the one empowered by inner demons :]
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