|Reviews for The Quill's Notebook|
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/24/2015
I love the idea that a respected Gryffindor would take Harry under his wing.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/24/2015
This one-shot makes no sense. Harry has changed his habits for so long that he gained weight, became muscled, bought new clothes, etc. And then you say he's been waiting for an apology for two weeks. His physical change had to have taken months of dedicated effort. The rest of the one-shot became meaningless after that.
| furface294 chapter 12 . 2/24/2015
For once someone gets a really true read on Ron, loved this chapter
| Iceflame55 chapter 3 . 10/3/2014
Interesting one here :).
| happylady chapter 23 . 8/27/2014
Jack is one sick puppy, i Harry can keep him in check
Until next time
| lilyflower50 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
hey this would make a great story I bet so will your others
| DarkViolet7258 chapter 23 . 8/9/2014
creepy as hell
| Runecutter chapter 22 . 8/9/2014
Nah, sadly this is not my piece of cake.
When they first said "their master" it just turned me off and seeing him evil enough to rant about treacherous cowards after being revived the exact same way Voldemort was...
I'm in to Harry Potter fanfics to read about the glorious hero. I can live with disillusioned, i can live with desperate and fighting dirty, i can even live with dedicated to the point where light and dark mix into a pretty deep shade grey... seeing him to imitate the last great artist in the field of douchebaggery, murder and insane political rulings just does not have any attraction for me. Harry's MY hero... i don't want him to be like Voldemort or Dumbledore, i want to be proud on the voice i hear in my head when reading, on the face i see before the eye of my imagination. This is making me nauseous and lets me feel dirty... why should i real it?
| ravenknight118 chapter 16 . 8/8/2014
Wow this chapter seems like a good start to a great story
| starboy454 chapter 23 . 8/8/2014
excellent updates I just he doesn't kill her
| starboy454 chapter 22 . 8/8/2014
| agnar chapter 22 . 8/8/2014
Sorry but it just comes off like Harry is voldemorts kid, not terribly original. The same resurrection ritual, hissing about his treacherous cowardly followers...
Your Harry and his followers have legit reasons for fighting back, for rebellion, they're ACTUALLY being killed and persecuted. They shouldn't resemble the death eaters in ANY WAY. Dark is over used to mean psycho and evil. LV and his DE's was psycho and evil. This Harry ought to be vicious and ruthless yes.
But he'd also be inspirational to his followers, and supportive of them, he'd have an ACTUAL cause, not just a fake one to excuse his quest for power.
| tricorvus chapter 21 . 7/30/2014
Nice, with that nice bizarre end touch
| tricorvus chapter 20 . 7/30/2014
Perfection part two.
| tricorvus chapter 19 . 7/30/2014
THAT was perfection