Reviews for Proven
Possessed4life chapter 19 . 7/9
Too lazy to log in but anyways this was pretty damn amazing but honestly I think you messed up the ending. Ash should have won since he gained his memory back but the big problem was leaving that cliffhanger like that. I needed to know how the relationship with Cynthia turned out and how the public recieves him. If you're reading this maybe you'll consider adding another chapter with that content as an epilogue or something. But that story was literally amazing, I'm honestly sad it ended.
Killdrenace chapter 19 . 5/21
Awesome story man can't wait for the next update
Dqn chapter 5 . 5/1
Oh no
Dqn chapter 3 . 5/1
I always wanted to see this battle
Dan chapter 2 . 5/1
Awesome
Guest chapter 19 . 3/29
How could You?
Guest chapter 18 . 3/29
Whoa awesome
Guest chapter 17 . 3/29
Ok author give him his memory
Guest chapter 16 . 3/29
Ugh idiot world
Guest chapter 15 . 3/29
No
Guest chapter 14 . 3/29
Steven nooooooooooooooo
Guest chapter 13 . 3/29
Yeah
Guest chapter 12 . 3/29
Ugh ash really
Guest chapter 10 . 3/29
Whoa how did Steven know
Guest chapter 8 . 3/28
Ha
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