|Reviews for Proven|
| klbjr chapter 19 . 3/30
that was the most bullshit ending to a half ass story. fuck this shit
| arctroopercat chapter 19 . 3/20
Awesome I hope for more awesomeness from you in the future
| IIChrissyII chapter 19 . 2/21
WHY DID HE LOSE!, WHY COULDN'T YOU LET HIM WIN, (I don't think I can forgive you for this)
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/14
I am disappointed with how the story has ended . Ash should have won . There should be more stuff in relationship between Ash and Cynthia . The story ended , felt like it was forceful. Not looked like it ended genuinely
| dat boi chapter 19 . 11/7/2016
im loving it :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
i didn't understand the ending he lost then what
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/30/2016
Let me just say that your grammar is trash and your attempts at breaking the fourth wall are times horribly and pathetically executed. I read insanely fast but it took me two hours to read this because of its general quality of dog shit. Good day!
| crazylucsrio123 chapter 19 . 9/2/2016
yo wtf wat ending was that man r u serious
| imnotraven16 chapter 19 . 7/13/2016
| SpencerDorman chapter 19 . 5/9/2016
I really did enjoy the story, but not the ending. I'm sorry, but I just didn't. I was hoping that the battle would begin with Amnesiac-Ash, and just over halfway through he would regain his memories. He would be losing, but he would still manage to make the comeback. And after all was said and done, Ash would go to Cynthia and kiss her on live television! I can accept how you ended the story, but I just wish it was something else. Oh, and you didn't really go over Ash's redemption, in the eyes of the public or in the legal system.
| Dranzer631 chapter 19 . 10/31/2015
This was a horrible way to end this story.
| theneutralite chapter 19 . 9/17/2015
:) very well done
| Michaelkoc1 chapter 19 . 8/13/2015
That was a really really super omega triple bad ending..
Just wow. Competely ruined the story.. The amnesia was unecessary and the loss to Cynthia just left a bad taste in my mouth.
The rest of the story was ok, the writing was meh but the plot was good enough for me to read until the end.
The league couldnt postpone the match because Ash was injured saving a champion? Thats just silly
| Possessed4life chapter 19 . 7/9/2015
Too lazy to log in but anyways this was pretty damn amazing but honestly I think you messed up the ending. Ash should have won since he gained his memory back but the big problem was leaving that cliffhanger like that. I needed to know how the relationship with Cynthia turned out and how the public recieves him. If you're reading this maybe you'll consider adding another chapter with that content as an epilogue or something. But that story was literally amazing, I'm honestly sad it ended.
| Killdrenace chapter 19 . 5/21/2015
Awesome story man can't wait for the next update