Reviews for The Bad Habit
Monkey D Swog chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Gengy I have a big question. When I read about your tumblr I was like holy miltanks he has a tumblr and I am feeling dandy so I'll check it out. I googled it and I got too two tumblr accounts one was advancer
Rales Mckoy chapter 4 . 1/3/2013
Hm, May has a secret and I wonder who exactly is May's father and what role will he play. I guess I'll have to wait an see.
Beastmode953 chapter 4 . 1/3/2013
lol well heres what i have to say about the civil war deletion...STOP SNITCHING! get a fucking day job and stop wasting your time fucking reporting peoples hard work because youre jealous of their success! fucktards! that is all...great job gengar. i wanna see norman punch ash for some reason but ill wait and see
nagidawn chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
Aw damn, when she pulled her shirt off that he'd get turned on or she'd run into a pack of rapists or something.
Ash is still a dipshit.
Luke Slot chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
Just to make sure I sent you the right Email it is Thanks!
Luke Slot chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
I Have a Fan Art for you to write a story about. It is a picture of Red and a fan character which I call Amber. If you email at this address I can Email you the picture. The only conditions I Have are that Red and Amber get together in the end and that you keep the Name Amber. I saw that there was a challenge you had to write a story about a piece of fan art. So send me your email and I'll send you the Picture. Thanks
The blue Shaymin chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
it needs a shaymin at the end a shaymin has to fly by please please please!
Advance Forward chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
Aw, this is a cute fic so far! I love reading "What-if?" stories, and this one just takes the cake! The AdvanceShipping in the story is off to a great development start and May being a crook is just interesting. I hope to see more!
vishal chapter 3 . 12/25/2012
next chapter soon
JPS97 chapter 3 . 12/23/2012
Sorry i'm so late to the party! Anyways, great chapter as always, any idea how long you'll make this one?
Beastmode953 chapter 3 . 12/23/2012
may with on but a bra? wtf gengar lol and hr has his hands on her in an alleyway lol
Beastmode953 chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
damn at least normans not the leader of a team lol i atill bread
Beastmode953 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
have ash make banana cake with sleeping liquid and may steal it lol
ace chapter 1 . 12/22/2012 never told me about a new fic. remind me to read it later. sounds my phones about to die and you know i forget
Top Coordinator chapter 3 . 12/21/2012
I swear I thought I was following this story. I feel so late. :c Anyways, I thought this chapter was really well-written. Really detailed but not excessively. I also appreciate you letting us there won't be more characters. I love them but I can't see this story with more of them. Ash is such a softie & May reacted really sweet at the end. You're doing wonderful 3
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