Reviews for Invisible |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Unfortunate that it has ended, but it has been a great read! I love how Jack was written as the age that he died as a teenager, as opposed to a mature adult. It makes his character so much more entertaining! Also, I love Tabe and Jacks weird love/hate relationship, as well as adult Jamie. Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() I like Tabe a great deal. His backstory was excellent and very tragic. I have absolutely no clue what “Gary Stu” means, but I REALLY like Tabe! He’s so awesome! The fish spirit is really cool too, but I can only picture him as Lagoon Boy (La’gan) from the second season of DC’s Young Justice series! XP |
![]() ![]() Did Jack just kill Spider-Man? |
![]() ![]() I can do fan art? I CAN DO FANART! *happy, happy, happy dance* If I do any (rough schedule, I don’t have a ton of time right now) then I’ll link it in the comments section. |
![]() ![]() Yup, I cried. Not gonna lie. |
![]() ![]() I love the idea of Jack just losing his staff playing hacky sack - by being the sack. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cupcake danced with Jack Frost? Cupcake has a crush on Jamie? Oh that's so cute! I loved this. Thanks for posting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I will be giving North new ears for Christmas." I love that line. It's a good one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() JAMIE REMEMBERED! WOOOO! Love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was great. I love Bunny showing he cares in his own Bunny way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Jack and Tabe helped protect Jamie, even if it's impossible for Jamie to believe in him again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! Poor Jack! Poor Jamie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you made Phil relationship to jack in this story. it's great/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeesh. Bunny eaten any of your own feet lately? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. I love Phil liking Jack, and putting up with the young spirit so that Jack has someone to play with. |