Reviews for Mal-a-Kai
Guest chapter 7 . 4/20/2014
Guest chapter 5 . 4/20/2014
Wow this was really funny!
Bandicutie chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
Deponk chapter 7 . 3/10/2013
Hehe, a nice story you had there. It was decent written and well executed and you got their characters right. But there is one thing that bugs me, and that's Mal's nicknames. Don't get me wrong, I love the idea and the way it gets on Mal. But some of them like Mal-ibear and Mal-lipoo kinda rubs me the wrong way kinda like Mal & Kai are a couple...

Oh god...

Screw Mals nightmare about his father, Natara and the psychopats. Mal waking up with Kai in his arms naked would totally break his mind. It would break everyone.
Succupirequeen chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
Welp. That escalated quickly.
I loved this. You stayed true to Kai's wacky antics and mannerisms.
Lovelyones chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
I loved this! You're a great writer. Keep up the good work! :D

mozzi-girl chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
Haha the key was in his pocket oh my life... Brill ending Tori :')

- Molly
The Beautiful Filth chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
Five second head start xD
and whatever, your stories are really funny to read and the plots are nice :D
keep it up! Looking forward to your other stories :D
AKgal2001 chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
Oh kai, being himself. I loved this story! It was really cute!
Katlana Child chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
xD The ending is brilliant! Mallie-poo is so sassy.

I'm still sad that this is over. Definitely one of my favorites. It's sad to see it go so soon. But it was a good story and I can't wait to see what else you have in mind.

You're amazing, Little Sis! :D

Keep writing!
Emmyrox2011 chapter 3 . 2/5/2013
mozzi-girl chapter 6 . 2/3/2013
Hehehe that's was a great chapter Tori! :')

- Molly
The Beautiful Filth chapter 6 . 2/3/2013
Mwahahahhahha Gangnam Style seriously?! I can't imagine Kai dancing that as celebration xD
and btw, you write very well for such a young person :) you're 11 or 13? That's really good :D
Guest chapter 5 . 1/26/2013
There is a sim called kai in the sims 3 latenight expansion... Hehe..
The Sugar Pixie chapter 5 . 1/25/2013
You got Kai spot on AGAIN! Congrats!

And are u sure ur not a duck? Cuz this story quacks me up!

That joke was lame. I'm so weird...XD
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