Reviews for Naruto: Wrath of the Emperor
flashjryt71 chapter 11 . 2/28
Yo I really don't know where to begin or what to say, but I have to say, Author-san you nailed the ending so good that not even the word good is enough, and that's just the ending .
The beginning to the end was amazing, the plot, the who take down konoha with oto plan was awesome and at the end were you transition from A to B was so overwhelming well down. Not everyone can do that, so once again amazing well done.
ModernRogue11 chapter 9 . 2/9
The Batman and Pirates of the Caribbean references are great!
Deltared52952 chapter 9 . 1/3
nice use of pirates of the Caribbean for the wedding scene I don't i would have thought of using it.
Zsombi chapter 11 . 12/29/2020
What I did not understood in either this and your other similar Naruto stories was why the heck did Naruto even in the darkest story wait until stuff happened and more than often just reacting to them instead of taking swift action the first chance he got.

For example he could have easily taken out or severely crippled Konoha (according to the scene) when he went back to take care of the 2 elder councilors.

I understand thay this way he achieved the same result while humiliating them over and over again.. but why drag it out when you have the means to deal with it swiftly and permanently? In his stead I would have dealt with as many of them as secretly possible while seeding the place with incendiary high-explosives. Rinse and repeat that once every 3~6 months and there wouldn't have been a Konoha or loyalists in a fraction of the time he spent on executong his convoluted manipulative plans. It was higjly inefficient and littered with a great many points of failure.

Otherwise it was a good read.
poimeme90 chapter 1 . 11/13/2020
Rinnegan? The fox eye was a great idea but we'll see
robert krause chapter 7 . 11/8/2020
sir on why Naruto made his pains why not made 2 woman one is the former host to the fox ,the beast woman and as for his mother is goth /ghost pain to part the former warriors and lost ones out to the lost ream , as for the others the 2 former men who made the vaillge , and his own twin looker one muslces and sword warrior , and when i Robert Krause if i was doing it Naruto well took the fan gril sarkura with him as his 2 wife and had her going up the racks as a slave /sex pet and then lover and then wife , queen of black heats ,
iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 11/8/2020
Uhm interresante! Molto interresante! Vediamo un pò che succede!
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 11 . 11/2/2020
All right, congratulations, I hope you keep pulling out more stories of naruto betrayal, it would be great
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2020
Sasuke getting his family killed? NOT ENOUGH... It was done on orders, so essentially it's "rank and file"... Just hidden.. Negji's dad? AGAIN, rank and file... It's just "one of those things that happen"... he's collateral damage... (although only because sarutobi is and always was SPINELESS)... Nobody REALLY has a beef with the leaf, or life EXCEPT naruto! He's got shit on pretty much his whole life and the entire series... I know kishi wanted to go for "underdog" but he's pretty much pissed off the entire world, so I would do something ELSE. There are THOUSANDS of naruto re-writes, that should give him a clue he SCREWED UP. Oh and your story.. OK... But sasuke as an S-rank? YOU REALIZE HE'S A GENNIN right? And pretty much a screw up... So S-rank? REALLY?

Kill the council? Their a bunch of civilians! It should be STUPIDLY easy for ANY of the "khonaha 12" to mulch right through them! LEE could eat them for breakfast, for crying out loud and he doesn't even have any "powers"!

"one thing about the uchiha"... "they are DRAMA QUEENS!" (and yes, this ESPECIALLY applies to the MALES!) Who else would have such a CONVOLUTED, STUPID, IDIOTIC, farfetched, NONSENSE plan for suicide, BUT an uchiha? (hello itachi). And obedito? His whole END game is trap everyone in an illusion? How is that gonna sit right with ANYONE? That's the most STUPID idea for a villain I've ever heard.. Again (IDIOT UCHIHA)... My gawd, I'm surprised these MORONS can get out of bed in the morning without giving themselves GRAVE injuries! They are apparently THAT DUMB! They aren't VILLAINS of the series.. They are BUFFOONS! You'd think SOMEONE (naruto or another) would WAKE up and go, "WOW, your bloodline is REALLY STUPID!".. "no wonder you got the sharringan, without it, there is REALLY NOTHING AT ALL to any of you!". Seriously, sasuke should be taken to a deep, dark root lab somewhere and CARVED UP LIKE A THANKSGIVING TURKEY to figure out his eyeballs! Giving them to COMPETENT ninja would be an asset to the village. (but danzo is barely higher on the i.q. list then the uchiha). You'd THINK.. that sasuke's "monkey marbles" would be BETTER PLACED, with people that can ACTUALLY use them to their potential... Think of a Kuerenai that could do genjutsu with a LOOK... Or unbreakable genjutsu... Think of Gai or Lee suddenly knowing all the moves his opponent is GONNA do, and is ready for them?... Even Anko or Ibuki suddenly being able to read every single facial "tick" a prisoner has or being able to hypnotically commanding them to "talk"... Sasuke ISN'T valuable to the leaf (he just isn't)... His EYEBALLS are! Sauske is valuable to two people IN THE ENTIRE elemental nations..1.. Orochimaru(why I am not sure because he'll burn through that body just as quick as all the others)... 2. Itachi.. For his convoluted scheme I said before... He's GOT to know (restoring the uchiha's honor... ISN'T happening with sasuke... He can't be that dumb.. Besides faulty premise.. He's assuming the uchiha HAD honor to restore.. THEY DIDN'T).

Kabuto, orochimaru, danzo and all the others who THINK their hiding are getting really tiresome... THEY ARE MENTALLY RETARDED! They aren't hiding.. They aren't THAT GOOD! NOBODY in the series is any good at stealth.. (which is actually hilarious, considering it's supposed to be about ninja!).. The "spymaster" puts on a fake-looking mustache and thinks it's a disguise for heaven's sake! Seriously who trained these people? Daffy duck or Bugs bunny? Because it sure as hell WASN'T a ninja! Ninja.. REAL ninja.. Should be "ghosts", "shadows".. Barely seen out of the corner of your eye and GONE when you look... TRUE TERRORS! Naruto should never have even been able to have been banished because all his enemies SHOULD have been DEAD IN THEIR BEDS! Ninja aren't WARLORDS or emperors... That's too public... They are the people you never hear about and NEVER, EVER wanna cross... the "shadow rulers". They are the people that make KINGS NERVOUS, and even TYRANTS wonder if their ACTUALLY ALONE IN THE ROOM? Naruto-verse blows all that to hell in a hand-basket. But still, ENOUGH with the sneaking.. NOBODY IS FOOLING ANYBODY ELSE! (the stealth is too LAME!) Come on, orochimaru basically ANNOUNCED to anko who he was (and more or less told his entire plan to sarutobi before the invasion) Kabuto had everything but a NEON FLASHING SIGN pointing to him saying "SPY"... You don't get a whole lot more OBVIOUS then these two!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2020
Sasuke getting his family killed? NOT ENOUGH... It was done on orders, so essentially it's "rank and file"... Just hidden.. Negji's dad? AGAIN, rank and file... It's just "one of those things that happen"... he's collateral damage... (although only because sarutobi is and always was SPINELESS)... Nobody REALLY has a beef with the leaf, or life EXCEPT naruto! He's got shit on pretty much his whole life and the entire series... I know kishi wanted to go for "underdog" but he's pretty much pissed off the entire world, so I would do something ELSE. There are THOUSANDS of naruto re-writes, that should give him a clue he SCREWED UP. Oh and your story.. OK... But sasuke as an S-rank? YOU REALIZE HE'S A GENNIN right? And pretty much a screw up... So S-rank? REALLY?

Kill the council? Their a bunch of civilians! It should be STUPIDLY easy for ANY of the "khonaha 12" to mulch right through them! LEE could eat them for breakfast, for crying out loud and he doesn't even have any "powers"!

"one thing about the uchiha"... "they are DRAMA QUEENS!" (and yes, this ESPECIALLY applies to the MALES!) Who else would have such a CONVOLUTED, STUPID, IDIOTIC, farfetched, NONSENSE plan for suicide, BUT an uchiha? (hello itachi). And obedito? His whole END game is trap everyone in an illusion? How is that gonna sit right with ANYONE? That's the most STUPID idea for a villain I've ever heard.. Again (IDIOT UCHIHA)... My gawd, I'm surprised these MORONS can get out of bed in the morning without giving themselves GRAVE injuries! They are apparently THAT DUMB! They aren't VILLAINS of the series.. They are BUFFOONS! You'd think SOMEONE (naruto or another) would WAKE up and go, "WOW, your bloodline is REALLY STUPID!".. "no wonder you got the sharringan, without it, there is REALLY NOTHING AT ALL to any of you!". Seriously, sasuke should be taken to a deep, dark root lab somewhere and CARVED UP LIKE A THANKSGIVING TURKEY to figure out his eyeballs! Giving them to COMPETENT ninja would be an asset to the village. (but danzo is barely higher on the i.q. list then the uchiha). You'd THINK.. that sasuke's "monkey marbles" would be BETTER PLACED, with people that can ACTUALLY use them to their potential... Think of a Kuerenai that could do genjutsu with a LOOK... Or unbreakable genjutsu... Think of Gai or Lee suddenly knowing all the moves his opponent is GONNA do, and is ready for them?... Even Anko or Ibuki suddenly being able to read every single facial "tick" a prisoner has or being able to hypnotically commanding them to "talk"... Sasuke ISN'T valuable to the leaf (he just isn't)... His EYEBALLS are! Sauske is valuable to two people IN THE ENTIRE elemental nations..1.. Orochimaru(why I am not sure because he'll burn through that body just as quick as all the others)... 2. Itachi.. For his convoluted scheme I said before... He's GOT to know (restoring the uchiha's honor... ISN'T happening with sasuke... He can't be that dumb.. Besides faulty premise.. He's assuming the uchiha HAD honor to restore.. THEY DIDN'T).
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2020
For big supernatural tails (like a goddess coming back).. most of it doesn't have enough POWER.. Sasuke getting his family killed? NOT ENOUGH... It was done on orders, so essentially it's "rank and file"... Just hidden.. Negji's dad? AGAIN, rank and file... It's just "one of those things that happen"... he's collateral damage... (although only because sarutobi is and always was SPINELESS)... Nobody REALLY has a beef with the leaf, or life EXCEPT naruto! He's got shit on pretty much his whole life and the entire series... I know kishi wanted to go for "underdog" but he's pretty much pissed off the entire world, so I would do something ELSE. There are THOUSANDS of naruto re-writes, that should give him a clue he SCREWED UP. Oh and your story.. OK... But sasuke as an S-rank? YOU REALIZE HE'S A GENNIN right? And pretty much a screw up... So S-rank? REALLY?

Kill the council? Their a bunch of civilians! It should be STUPIDLY easy for ANY of the "khonaha 12" to mulch right through them! LEE could eat them for breakfast!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2020
I've never understood why "dark naruto" stories put him against everyone... You'd think with as much fracturing as the leaf had there would be some sides (in fact most sides) that would be with him... It wouldn't be a "bang", the elemental nations would change with a "whimper"... Lets take the leaf... Apparently in fanfiction.. They have the hokage.. Leading them, but somehow he/she can't disagree with the councils.. which are just civilians...BUT the civilians have to bow to the ELDERS (whom have no idea of the world and haven't been out of the village in a lifetime)... BUT the hokage has no rule over the clans... WHICH REALLY MAKES NO SENSE considering the village was started to END the era of the warring clans... So basically, the clans are ruling the village, the hokage is ruling the village, the elders are rulling the village, the council is ruling the village? If THAT isn't enough of a mess... The diyamo is supposed to rule the village... The council wants naruto dead, the clans know he can't be dead, or their screwed..The elders want to hide everything and everyone to play nice, danzo wants to rule (for some STRANGE reason, because he rules better as is), and the hokage just seems to sit there with rose-colored glasses, smoking "something" in his pipe.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2020
Take away his "plot armor" and he's an E-ranked, barley above gennin.. He's MULCH.. for really ANYBODY... He truly isn't THAT strong... He needs lee's moves to save him the chunin exams.. he needs naruto to save him from garaa. he needs itachi to protect him from orochi.. He needs orochi to protect him from naruto, he actually has NO STRENGTH... He's pathetic.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/19/2020
Why in the world is jiraiya present? His jaw is wired shut, so he can't comment.. His leg is busted, so he's NOT a ninja.. His ONE arm is busted (so no jutsu AT ALL) he's effectively a LIABILITY at this point. He's good for absolutely NOTHING... And even there as "moral support"? LOOK at him... Does this look like it raises morale? He's was the "baddest of the bad" and NOW HE'S A CRIPPLE!... For daring to TRY to spy on naruto...I'd say that's the opposite of "moral support". Also why punch him into women's baths? Isn't that exactly where he wants to go:? It might have been comedy about a decade ago, but IT"S NOT FUNNY ANYMORE... He gets beat up, he's fine in 60 seconds.. What's the actual punishment?... Send him to the critical CARE unit.. And if he's NOT gonna be fine for MONTHS? That's punishment... Even here, if that's an attempt at levity, it fell very flat!

Sasuke an S-ranked? AT BEST he's an A-ranked.. Even with the rinnegan (late canon) he's not s-ranked, he's just too stupid.
Slogo chapter 11 . 8/19/2020
Bro thanks for the story really enjoy it your a great author make more naruto fanfiction out of all naruto west fanfictions i read this one is my favorite thanks again
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