Reviews for The Dying Flame
Guest chapter 9 . 9/20/2013
AnonymousVulture chapter 9 . 9/19/2013
Love it! Continue
Akatsuki-Metal chapter 7 . 6/17/2013
yay! riza's okay and roy put some guys in their place

this chapter was really good keep up the good work
riza-hawkeye-611 chapter 7 . 6/16/2013
Ahhh snapppp.

I can't wait for the next chapter!
BrooklynOfVale chapter 7 . 6/16/2013
:O update sooooon i wanna see their conversation!
Shimmerbreeze chapter 6 . 6/13/2013
Gasp! And the plot thickens! Omg Mustang is going to snap... literally and figuratively.
BrooklynOfVale chapter 6 . 6/13/2013
D: update soon!
Akatsuki-Metal chapter 5 . 6/11/2013
this chapter was really good keep up the good work
riza-hawkeye-611 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
I knew it would be Rebecca!:D

But, I really like the story and hope you update soon!
Mizuki Saki chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
OMG THE NEXT CHAPTER! I was just finishing up reading before I went to bed and then I checked my mail and got a notification that you updated and now I'm so hyper I can't sleep you need to write more! (I'm being a hypocrite right now aren't I? ') but anyways now I'm all excited for the next chapter so you have to write more! ;3;
Akatsuki-Metal chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
this story is really good keep up the good work
BrooklynOfVale chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
I KNEW it would ve Rebecca! :D bffls xD
Thom Phan chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
Have you ever actually tried to do twenty with the boot added on? You really are evil.

Always happy to see murder inc. doing there job the real way. (look that one up if you don't get the ref.)
Violet Abilene chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
*Tears* This is really, really good! I can't wait to read more!
valkyrieXhawk chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
Wow. That was a massive change from the first chapter. I love this and i look forward to the next chapter.
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