Reviews for Unexpected Reality
JadedTinks chapter 7 . 2/19/2013
Love the story...you should so do a sequel
Emerald Gaze chapter 7 . 2/17/2013
wait so this is the ending? well that was unexpected and kinda disappointing though i totally understand. stories that require constant action can be the hardest to write for especially when everything starts out so perfect that you can't bring yourself to ruin things for your chars
though i do wish this could have been continued and we could have seen some more action it does make sense that it ends here
!_!
FanFicGirl10 chapter 7 . 2/17/2013
The End? :) That's sad this story had so much portential. At least Daryl and Jill had a happy ending :)
Regin chapter 6 . 1/4/2013
I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!
Emerald Gaze chapter 6 . 12/2/2012
it's fine if your not good at smut, I'm trying to lay off that anyway
i really just want a really good story to read and so far this one is doing pretty well. you've managed to make things pretty much perfect while still putting in some barriers like are and that walker attack, so things balance out some. all i can say for those 2 at this point is that i hope they use protection cuz i doubt she could put up with being confined and pregnant for at least nine months! _ !
simpleKate chapter 6 . 12/2/2012
Hello, I just wanted to say your story is great! You inspired me to start writing fan fic. Keep on writing. I love it!
Jalen Writes It All chapter 6 . 11/29/2012
Damn Jill is living the dream
Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2012
Update!
FanFicGirl10 chapter 6 . 11/27/2012
Smut! ;) Smut! ;) Smut! ;) I love it! Can't wait for more :) Update Soon!
mrskaz453 chapter 6 . 11/27/2012
Personally, I think it was perfect...imagination is a wonderful thing...LOL

I really like this... Daryl/Jill/Claire...nice family

update soon
FanFicGirl10 chapter 5 . 11/26/2012
Aww they are like a family :) So cute and perfect :) Claire really likes Daryl, that is very good. I want smut in the next chapter ;) Update Soon!
0netflixme0 chapter 5 . 11/26/2012
loved it...
FanFicGirl10 chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
Claire is so adorable! "Are you going to date my mommy?" She is so cute :) Jill and Daryl flirting ;) Update Soon!
NightCoringMadness chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
INTENSE SEXUAL FRUSTRATION
Miyu the Fangirl chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
This one of the most interesting stories I've found yet. Jill is awesome, along with her brother and everyone else so far.
-_- Though, I hope Daryl gets over himself soon. As was said in the story, dead things are eating people, no one should give a flying fuck about an older guy being with a younger chick...Unless it was a major age difference, like the guy is old enough to be the girls father. -shiver- That's just weird, a little creepy, and nasty -I wanna see little kids that look like Daryl and Jill running around. :D
Can't wait for the next update

...I just rambled in a review...I need to stop drinking coffee when I read fanfiction.
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