|Reviews for WITCH Dreams of Lusteria|
| Gerganafen chapter 8 . 3/24/2014
An really interesting and exciting part! Can't wait for the next one! I'm wondering why Kimi reacted thus at the end - may this man be an Celestial Warrior masked as Kaishin?
| yellow 14 chapter 8 . 3/23/2014
This is running a bit late, but as you reminded me on DA, I haven't gotten here yet.
To be honest...not as happy with this chapter as the previous chapters. The tenses really jump around and it's pretty distracting. Also, Kimi's relative is a bit on the convenient side.
On the flip side, the fight scenes are pretty good and I like the monks. The way they handled the situation was pretty good.
Overall, I liked it, so keep updating
| Croggon0127 chapter 8 . 2/11/2014
Awesome fanfic. Please update soon! I wanna know what will happens next!
| Suachuacat2014 chapter 8 . 2/5/2014
Awesome fanfic! I'm totally hooked! Update soon please! I wanna know what will happen next!
| windygalia chapter 8 . 1/28/2014
What's fascinating to me about this chapter is all the cultural references. From Zhang Yide, the White Snake, the Shaolin monks, and even their spiritual Buddhist mantra for purification, this chapter is quite interesting. It seems to me that you have definitely done your research and it feels like I'm reading some of those awesome Japanese cult manga series, such as xxxHoLic.
I did try to listen to the Sanskrit version of the Great Compassion Mantra on youtube, and you're right...it sounded very peaceful and beautiful and very fitting for the monks in this story.
I also wonder about all of the relationship between Kimi with the Guardians as well as her relationship with people. Based on my interpretation of her so far, it is as if she doesn't trust people that easily and her cynical and twisted personalities can only be rooted in something that had happened to her in the past. The cliffhanger at the end of this chapter seems to point in that direction. I wonder if Kaishin is really a friend or a foe.
And I am very keen on finding out more on Kyochi, the missing Guardian of Darkness. So far, he is still a mysterious figure who's...out cold...or incapacitated to do anything and that makes me wonder more about him as a person.
Another great chapter. Keep up the good work. I look forward into reading the next one soon.
| Kyltie09 chapter 8 . 1/28/2014
I am totally digging this story of yours. It's so much more interesting than the later comic issues these days. And wow, they managed to put Kyochi's healing potion to use now. I like how you remember the tiny details. Great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one. I really want to find out why Kimi lashed out at the man who saved her and her friends.
| witchGal chapter 8 . 1/28/2014
*gasp* Oh my gosh! What had those evil Warriors done to Kyochi? They're gonna use him against his own sister and the other Guardians? By the way, love the exorcism part and nice cliff hangers. Is Kaishin another cousin of Kimi's?
| witchGal chapter 7 . 1/28/2014
I'm curious about Kishimoto and his little sister now. Are they going to be recurring characters in this story, too?
| windygalia chapter 7 . 1/28/2014
A slower paced chapter, but still enjoyable enough, especially near the end.
| windygalia chapter 6 . 1/28/2014
what I actually love about this story is all the research you've put into for your plot and your characters. I love how you integrated the Deadly Sins into this story, even though they're from western beliefs yet for the Celestial Warriors, you've based them from the Four Symbols that exists in East Asian countries. What's more, I love the creativity of their elements. Rather than using the five Chinese elements, you've managed to give them all western elements such as water, fire, earth, and air that would fit their symbols and characteristics. It looks like they will be the biggest opponents the Guardians have ever faced as of yet.
| windygalia chapter 5 . 1/28/2014
I do recall seeing Zhuge Liang somewhere on the net and in video games. It's nice to see your Lusterian version of this man as Kimi's uncle. Also, it's nice to see that there are cities like Edo on the planet of Lusteria, too. Oddly, I thought it would be mostly wild and dangerous since the first chapter. Interesting take near the end...makes me wonder if Kenji will be back with a vengeance and if the phial will play a role in this story.
| windygalia chapter 4 . 1/28/2014
I'm not surprised to see the students excited about Kimi on her first day at Sheffield since they do get excited whenever there is a new student both in the original comic series and the animated series of W.I.T.C.H.
I am curious to see if this Kishimoto boy will play a vital role in the story. Also, I am curious to know how he and Kyochi could have similar black auras.
As for Matt...he probably deserved that anyway.
| windygalia chapter 3 . 1/28/2014
Wow, I'm glad that you've added in Miranda as a big part of this chapter even though she's only a character from the animated series. It's great to see that you've integrated the new threat and the new Guardian into the story.
| witchGal chapter 6 . 1/28/2014
Wow, these Celestia Warriors are bad ass news for the Guardians. Love it.
| witchGal chapter 5 . 1/28/2014
Another interesting chapter. The battle between the Guardians and those wielders seemed interesting here enough. update soon