I have to say don't pay attention to anyone who critisizes your writing style or plot its your story tell it the way you want if anyone finds not to their liking there is many stories to choose from. You keep on writing 'em I'll keep on reading 'em

I've attempted to read this story twice and I never finish it because it starts out strong and then stops being a story and just becomes conversations. For example, Booth invites Bones dancing and she says yes but then you don't write the date you skip to another dream and to the next day, it feels like you skipped the story lol.

Oh that was a good way to handle that episode and bring it into this AU story. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing

After reading this maybe for the second time can’t remember something’s jumped out at me like as if I read this fic before but other times it was like reading a new fic. What an enjoyable read

At the beginning I don’t feel like I have read this fic before. But now I feel like I did maybe when you first started writing it. I feel like pela y is going to be in the picture an some how this new property make in appearance. Will continue to read. I really enjoy reading it.

Thoroughly enjoyed the to stay the sequel now.

I don't think your stories are boring at all.

I always find your back stories interesting.

I'm glad you've written so many stories. Great for all this time at home right now.

And here we have a moment where I hate TV in America. Not everyone is a Christian, you jerks... some of us don't care about the 25th of December and this show wants to act like there's something wrong with us. Hell, not even all Christians celebrate the 25th as Christmas... Orthodox practitioners anyone?

This fic is so old so I know that you probably won't read this but while I love it, the one thing that bothers me is that you did the same thing that the show runners did and did their getting together off screen. Bit disappointed at that but what can I say? Still a good fic, well written and interesting.

really enjoying the story arc about the aftermath of the tornado.

loving this so far. can't thank you enough for all your hard work in creating these stories. they are keeping me sane as I recover from major surgery. would pm u , but can't figure out how. I hope you see this.

I really enjoyed the winding road and how you've given them happiness!

Was Dan Pelant related to Christopher Pelant