|Reviews for The Fear of Want|
| IThoughtMYJokesWereBad chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Wow. This was an intense one-shot. The raw emotion and tangle of thoughts really pulled me in. Not to mention your oh-so descriptive writing style created perfect images in my mind as I read. Loved it.
| Phoenix Refrain chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
| SarahCullen4 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
| Destined627 chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
This was soo good! Had me thinking it was really the present, very clever!
| Burlesons Pride chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Loved it! Great job.
| risingfromtheshadows chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
WTH! She was dreaming?
U r a good writer though
| batbaby chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Holy crap, that was all a dream?! Good job!
| MysteryNight chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
This was rather sad... It was good though :)
| Emma Kellog chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
It's an interesting time you have chosen to explore, and despite the fact that she is alone, it's a pretty intense scene. I think you depicted her internal struggle and general sense of apathy quite well. How do you return to normal life after experiencing the events she has. Even if Prim were alive and Peeta wasn't hijacked, it would still be a tough adjustment. Am I correct in assuming that there has been a jump in time from when she falls asleep and then wakes up with Peeta sitting on the bed beside her? That is how I read it. The ending served as a bright counterpoint to her darkest night. A quality little one shot. Thank you for posting.