Reviews for The Task
Kate Elizabeth Black chapter 14 . 1/17/2013
Hermione is the master of the elder wand now. greatt :D
ChromaticQueen chapter 15 . 1/17/2013
WOW! You just had to stop the story there didn't you? Totally a cliffhanger I could have done without xD Oh well, but amazing story! I love it so much (I actually think I'm addicted to it xD)! I will look forward to your next update! :D
And I love Stracciatella ice cream! It tastes simply wonderful!
Kate Elizabeth Black chapter 15 . 1/17/2013
wowww she just killed :D tom should find out should understand that she's not weak :D
mh21 chapter 15 . 1/17/2013
Wow! Excellent confrontation between Grindelwald and Hermione! The little story between Gellert and Albus at the beginning was bittersweet and a nice touch to the chapter. I'm wondering how Hermione and Riddle's magic will interact now that she's used the killing curse. I also wonder if Dumbledore will suspect Hermione of killing Gellert and will make an enemy of her - he's powerful enough he could probably sense how her magic has changed.

I'm hoping Hermione will be able to prevent Riddle from becoming the complete lunatic he was in canon with her presence in the past and that she stops following Dumbledore's time travel rules so she can change things for the better.

I think you write Riddle so well - the way he was manipulating her into thinking Meredith just tripped and that he was innocent, all while kissing her... it was just so *Voldemort* of him. Perfectly in character.

I just had a thought - instead of storing the priceless magical artifacts in her beaded bag, she should put an undetectable extension charm on a mokeskin bag (like the kind Hagrid gave Harry, where only the owner of the bag can take things out). That way Dumbledore and Riddle won't be able to get to the Hallows at all.

I love the length of your chapters, you always write nice long chapters that are so fun to read. Please update soon! :)
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 15 . 1/17/2013
So...cool...! Mines is pistachio, green tea and mint chocolate chip-and vanilla bean...I like alot of ice cream...
sam853 chapter 5 . 1/17/2013
Since reviews are chocolate symbolozing love. Your work deserves lots of chocolate.
sam853 chapter 4 . 1/17/2013
I really do like your dark portrayal of tom.
sam853 chapter 3 . 1/17/2013
Really why wud slughorn like Wednesday?!really good plot so far.
Stromsten chapter 15 . 1/17/2013
Wow, so Hermione's a killer now. She'll have to deal with that, emotionally. Also, does she really buy Tom's lame story about 'accidentally' trying to kill Meredith?
Guest chapter 15 . 1/16/2013
Ooo the tension between Tom and Hermione... Love it. Can't wait to read what happens next. I'm hooked
werevampluvr chapter 15 . 1/16/2013
Favorite flavor is chocolate chip cookie dough
Radiant Innocence chapter 14 . 1/15/2013
I really like your story so far. Keep up the good work! I eagerly await your update!
Stranger chapter 14 . 1/14/2013
I love this. :) Makes me keep reading and come back for more! Update soon please.
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 14 . 1/13/2013
Brilliant! Xxxx
RavenclawPrincess90 chapter 14 . 1/13/2013
Amazing story *hugs* love love love it! You should totally make Hermione dark *winkwink* Pleeeeeeeeease update!? I need more Tomione *pleads and begs*
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