Reviews for The Task
Guest chapter 8 . 12/16/2012
i like this story a lot but i was wondering why can't hermione use her mind manipulation on tom?
i am nobody you know chapter 8 . 12/16/2012
KICK HER ASS HERMIONE lol excuse my language but Meredith is just... ARGH. Please update again soon, I would love to see Meredith get jinxed or cursed or something that would make her sorry! :D
diamond.princess.angel chapter 7 . 12/15/2012
Love it!
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 7 . 12/15/2012
Brilliant! Xx
Black Star 145885 chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
Great chapter as usual, I loved the all thing!
For a good story there is "Ultima Ratio", maybe you already read it, if you haven't you'll find it in p3 of "Hermione/Tom Jr Complet".
I look foward to the next chapter.
PS: The "Je promets" you don't need the "s" because it's only you. And "Je promet" is correct but most people will say "Je le promet", that's all!
Dawn chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
I like this story. Can't wait to read what happens next
TennisRebels15 chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
love this story please update soon!
brighteyes2889 chapter 7 . 12/13/2012
So happy for the update! Trying to figure out what happened in the forest with the black smoke... but I got nothing. Lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
i am nobody you know chapter 7 . 12/13/2012
Nice chapter! Please update soon! :)
Smithback chapter 7 . 12/13/2012
I liked the odd fog
silver.tongued.serpent chapter 6 . 12/11/2012
Ah such a suspenseful ending! I was left on the edge of my seat, waiting for your next update.

I've made several forays into the Tomione fics but this is the first one I've really enjoyed where I feel the author has portrayed Riddle as he would have been back then, instead of all fluffy bunnies and rainbows as soon as he meets Hermione.

Update soon!
Smithback chapter 6 . 12/11/2012
electricsymphony chapter 6 . 12/11/2012
Woah, that was great. :D I love the pacing of this story, it's very deliberate and well-crafted, and your characterizations of Tom of Hermione are beyond perfect. One tiny suggestion-I'd really love to continue to see some more focus on the other Slytherin students and perhaps more insight into how they view this new Granger girl and why their handsome leader seems to be giving her so much attention. ;) But either way, the story is brilliant, and I wait in anticipation for your next update.
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL chapter 6 . 12/10/2012
Brilliant! Xxxxx
Black Star 145885 chapter 6 . 12/10/2012
Very well made.
Sorry I can't tell you more because I just loved the hall thing.
Please update soon!
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