|Reviews for Second Life in Reality|
| A Rabid Fan chapter 10 . 3/24/2014
Player Name: Seigyo Kaosu (Controlled Chaos)
Nickname: Seig, Kao, Yoka, CC (Mostly referred as Kaosu)
Race: Beast; Dragon (Leathery Wings, Scaly tail emerging from tail bone with a spike at the end -Sometimes used in battle- , Claws between knuckles -think Wolverine-, Fangs
Element: Water (Uses blood as a medium. Any spilt blood she can control, doesn't work if the blood is still in a person)
Height: 164 (Average though her wings make her look bigger)
Weapon of Choice: A large black double headed scythe. The blade is stained red (looks like blood) One blade is smooth while the other blade has jagged teeth. A blood red jewel is in between the to blades. Growing Type
Level: One below Kristy's (28?) Any EXP earned by Kaosu can be transferred to other teammates. Can level up players however will lose levels if she does so
Eye Colour: The whole eye is black with a gold cat eye in the middle that glows in the dark
Hair Colour: White with the tips dyed red. Tied back in a messy ponytail that reaches the middle of her back
Personality: A badass. Has a bubbly, cheerful personality despite her ominous appearance when with friends/in private. However when her or her friends are threatened, when she enters a battle, or when she is in front of a huge crowd, she becomes emotionless and slightly sadistic. She also tends to threaten or mentally torture any enemies.
History: She lived in Netherlands, being half Dutch and half Taiwanese. When entering college, instead of entering the Ivy Leagues, she moved to T City and joined XXX University. Studying for a medical and literature degree hoping to eventually become a Plastic Surgeon. She has a minor degree in general medicine. (So she can be a medic in Second Life) In real life her name is Aria de Groot. She is a natural bishie with hazel hair and green eyes.
Family: A Taiwanese, American mom named Jenny HSU who moved to America at a young age. A Fashion designer who offers freebies to Aria. A Dutch dad named Philip de Groot who works in business and technology. A uncle named Stephen (JoJo) Hsu who works in business but teaches martial arts in his free time. Aria was taught at a young age and has a black belt in both Muay Thai and Karate. A younger sister who is still in High school.
Likes: Chocolate, winning, competition, scaring people, sour sweets, apples, battling, games, old manga, traveling, animals especially snakes
Dislikes: Losing, betrayal, being alone, being bored, cowards, fangirls/boys
Pets: Later on will get a pure white with gold highlights, whip like snake with feathery wings attached in his midsection. Curls around her hand (Like a gauntlet) and looks like a real bracelet until it moves. Its poison is strong enough to kill a large mountain lion.
Random Facts: She loves to initiate battles and then winning them. Spartan like perspective. Loves to be scratched where her wings are attached to her shoulder blades. Enjoys wars and chaos, hence her name. Dislikes sheep (Mindless followers)
Stats: Level 28 Race: Dragon Beastwomen Class: Berserker Reputation: 45 Health: 4750 Mana: 2500 Unspent Skill Points: None EXP: 780/1000 to level 29 Strength: 80 Physique: 59 Agility: 70 Intelligence: 37 Willpower: 28 Wisdom: 42 Charisma: 63 Luck: Unknown
Abilities: Blood Rain Causes a storm of corrosive blood to be summoned: Uses 600 Mana / End War A suicide move that leaves the player with 1 health point left: Causes a massive death wave that incinerates everything in its path / Dark Void Causes attackers to fall asleep. When asleep their health is slowly drained away. However if held for too long the user has a higher risk of falling to Dark Void as well. / Soul Bond If the user loses HP the cursed player also loses HP / Psychotic Rage Puts the user in a blood frenzy lasting up to 20 minutes. Stats are greatly increased and moves are powered up. However defence is lowered and a sense of well being is removed / Fleet Feet Speed is greatly increased fro a duration of 15 minutes: uses 150 Mana / Toxic Strike Coats weapons with an extremely poisonous venom which, if the skin touches it, will slowly kill the opponent unless it is washed off with holy water: Cannot be used more than 5 times a day and may effect the user if it lands on them. Higher resistance to the poison though. / Final Gambit An attack that will inflict damage equal to double the users remaining HP. User will, however, die afterwords /
YOU MAY CHANGE THE STATS IF NEEDED
However my character must have high agility and strength
HOPE YOU USE HER! X3
| Rie chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
| MisoaUzuki chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Nickname: The white king,The beast trapped in a cage,The raging Destroyer and the The walking Madness.
Weapon- The Sixth Phantom Lord Sword a forbidden sword that was once held by the Sixth Phantom Lords a cursed sword that will consume you into madness.
Level- 41 Berserker mode- Level 100
Eye color- Right eye Blue, Left Eye Red
Hair color-white with red and black streaks
Personality- he's cool, calm and a collective person but hid his personality by wearing a mask acting all shy and quiet.
Likes- Torture, blood,snow and people who scream in pain.
Dislikes- People who betrayed their comrades and people who gives up easily.
Random Facts- Fubuki doesn't like to be the center of attention so he just stays at the corner so nobody ever notices him so his always forgotten or left behind by his comrades :DD.
History- Fubuki also has berserker mode where he be all creepy,sadistic and twisted and be a physcho , The berserker modes only opens when he finds an opponent that is worthy for him.
Goal- To find an equal rival to match his skills and finding new friends along the way Kristy.
Likes- No one T_T
Rival- Maybe kenshin
| MyLugiaTamer chapter 8 . 6/18/2013
I really enjoy this story and I hope you keep I would also send an O.C in to help with the story
Player name- Grif(real name is Kung Lao)
Class - Swordsman
Weapon of Choice- A huge broad sword made of diamonds(Swords name is Tallis)
Eye color - Electric Blue
Hair color- Dark Brown
Personality - Happy-go-lucky(not in battle) sadistic(In battle) ,funny,protective
History- when first logging on he had trouble on what to do, but after a while he became used to the game
Likes -Food,Sparring,Leveling up,Nice people,making friends,protecting
Dislikes- Rude people,playboys that mess with people hearts,being protected, being called weak,
Random facts about your character- He has a sensitive spot on his,and whenever his ear is touched he turns giddy
Appearance- Shoulder length bedhead hair,medium size build,sort of a Bishie look(in real life too)
| Bobwiwi chapter 10 . 2/19/2013
No Senpoku. then I'd be lonely.
Amai: ok here's the deal. We'll flip a coin, heads I win and you don't do senpoku, tails you lose and write a new chapter. *grins*
| Ignis76 chapter 10 . 1/28/2013
It looks awesome. Zazie didn't appear though -pouts-
| cheshirekitten909 chapter 8 . 1/19/2013
Weapon- A long bow, katana
Eye color- Lavender
Hair color-Black with silver streaks
Personality- Acts goofy, quick to anger
Likes- Torture, blood, nerdy stuff, old anime, animals
Random Facts- Komori tends to ramble when talking about something she likes and is constantly trying to find people who are nerdy like her. She hates it when people act like bastards to anyone and is quick to defend those who are weaker.
| Ignis76 chapter 9 . 1/12/2013
Well, if you need help I certainly don't mind aiding you. Sorry if its too much, I tend to go a bit over board. Well here's my oc.
Player name: Zazie
Height: 6' 7
Weapon of Choice: Claymore
Eye color: Lilac purple
Hair color: Light blue, shoulder length
Phyisique: Tall, slender but well toned and slightly muscular
Personality: Usually silent and kind but has a short fuse and a horrific temper
Likes: Food and making herbal remidies
Dislikes: Blood and violence.
Random facts about your character: Due to a slight but permanent glitch, she has gained an obsurd amount of physical speed, strength and endurance that are supposed to be only for the warrior class. Although it has come in handy in combat, if she uses her martial arts skills. This makes her a front line fighter.
She's a quiet and gentle girl who hates any form of violence, hence why she decided to be a priest. Although, ironically, she has an extemely short fuse and her temper makes her quite violent and as a result she's quite feared despite her low level.
| Kai Chen chapter 9 . 1/11/2013
| Bobwiwi chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
OH GOOD! i can't wait for the next chapter! *hint hint wink wink nudge nudge shove shove*
| ghest chapter 7 . 12/13/2012
THIS IS TOTALY AWSOME!
| Bobwiwi chapter 8 . 12/7/2012
you know i can lend you some of my creativity .
| Crazed King chapter 8 . 12/4/2012
Hn interesting ill help you out then!
Name: Korah Sevier
Weapon: Deadly Wires with poison on them
And exploding chocolate
Hair: short and dark brown
Eyes: Chocolate brown
Likes: chocolate and food
Hates: spiders, chocolate stealers
Extra info: if you steal his choco, he will hunt you down and take all your money and buy choco with it
Made this one on the spot. I like choco
| Bobwiwi chapter 5 . 11/27/2012
i love this! please keep Writing! :D :D XD
was that what you wanted Pandot?
| Crazed King chapter 4 . 11/26/2012
I like new chapters!