Reviews for The Last Temptation of Surak: S'Vec the betrayer
maba7x chapter 27 . 2/16/2013
Oh the drama!
Caren Rose chapter 27 . 2/15/2013
Ohhhhhh sad :(

At least he was able to convey important information before he died ... permanently.

Aw, who knew. You can write a sad story about Surak & Co.
Ahlisha chapter 27 . 2/15/2013
:-*( Sad T'Klass had to release his katra like that. To walk into the void, all he is and was lost. He embodied the needsmof theemany out weighing the needs of the few, or the one. It still causes me to cry though. :-(
T'Hya chapter 27 . 2/15/2013
*Weeping* T'Klaas, my love, my only...I will not forget you. I always loved you, my dearest...your name will live on in my heart, and in our clan.
Sensara chapter 27 . 2/15/2013 we must build the future. Great chapter, Fame. Very nicely done.
Caren Rose chapter 26 . 2/5/2013
Oh. Wow. Whoa. Uh ...

S'Vec went full-on scary there.


2redbird chapter 26 . 2/5/2013
Cliff hanger!
Ahlisha chapter 26 . 2/5/2013
O_O T'Klass was crushing on T'Lyn? That sicked to see him tortured, his resolve dodn't break. So this beastly machine is the projenitor of the Romulan Mind sifter. Nasty peice of work that is.:-) Fameon I like how you are interweaving what is seen in the series' to what is in the past. Not only technology but people, traditions. A genisis of how some traditions started.

Wow. One would never know that T'Klass loved humanity. One wouldn't know he gave a wit from eailer behavouir , espcially bisting T'Lyn's chops saying mess like, " You are more human than Vulcan. You're weak.." Giess he was hidding how he really felt under the facade of bigitry. It seems his love was the inconditional, no strings attached type. I bet S'Vec realy wasn't liking that.
Wild huh? Never occured to me I was "wild". :/ H'mm..nahh. Not likely. I'm not going to go howl at the ful moon ok? Wild.. hehehe.. Unless someone can touch my mind and soul, noone will ever know what's inside a human being.
Kuvak L'Vek chapter 26 . 2/5/2013


Wow...our clan mother was strong as iron! No wonder she is revered even by other clans. She was a mighty woman! And our forebear was a kolinahr master! We hope one day to have mates this devoted.
T'Hya chapter 26 . 2/5/2013
T'Klaas, my dearest love...I will not let your memory fade. As long as my clan stands, your name will be revered, as my ashal-veh, as my ashaya, now and always. Even death will not separate us. You were mine from the moment I met you, k'diwa, and you are still mine, even in death. Rest in peace, my love, and may your katra rest in peace in the halls of our forebears.
S'Vec chapter 26 . 2/5/2013
*Laughs maniacally* So falls the mighty T'Klaas, and so will fall the fool, Surak! All you possess will be mine, *Teacher*! All of it! Your world, your people, and the lovely T'Lyn...all mine!
Sensara chapter 26 . 2/5/2013
Damn, girl, that did give me the feels! Poor T'Klaas!

And S'Vec can go to hell!

Great chapter, and I can't wait for more!
Ahlisha chapter 25 . 2/2/2013
A great chapter. I am surprsed noone has tried to change the past in which the "sandstorm" is seen as it truly is. Basically tell Nirak, hey thats an army not a sandstorm.
I do like his(Nirak) characterization, such a happy guy. I can't help but smile when I read him.
Caren Rose chapter 25 . 2/2/2013
Hey, another chapter!

So T'Lyn lost a child? The one that was born in the last chapter or whenever? I'm confused?

T'Sen's son is named Spock, huh? Haha.

Oh, I hope all goes well with upcoming events ... but if S'Vec is involved ... *shudder* ... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaa!
Nirak chapter 25 . 2/2/2013
Food and and rest...was she serious when she said she was not touching me for a long time? That would be the most painful thing I can imagine...I need T'Sen like I need water to survive...

I pray this birth goes well, my wife!
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