Reviews for Black Swan
shae chapter 3 . 5/6/2008
you silly goose!

how can you say you're not good at writing romances that was the best romance i've read so far (and trust me i've read a lot on this website)

it was so romantic and sweet, i loved it. can you write one for hikaru&lantis and fuu&ferio please?
Homigawd chapter 3 . 9/10/2006
I thought this was good...not to Fluffy and Good...
Avatar chapter 3 . 1/4/2004
GAWD that was so good! I've never felt so much emotions before. This is the only fic that ever made me come so damn close to crying! Ur going way too hard on urself if u say that this sucked coz it RAWKS! (Oh and dont u dare stop writing romance fics _ go asmi!) God bless u for this fic!
Potato Maiden chapter 3 . 11/20/2003
MORE! I WANT MORE! UMI ASCOT FICS! okay im calm, I like it!
DS chapter 3 . 10/9/2003
This is pretty good and it's very kawaii :) Keep writing

Rocketgirl888 chapter 3 . 8/29/2003
*dies* I LOVE IT! Beautiful and fantastically written. GREAT JOB!

ASCOT/UMI FOREVER... and ever and ever and ever...
libranravenclaw chapter 3 . 8/9/2003
Yay! Very wonderful, I love Umi/Ascot fic's, I think you should continue them, please.

Well then, laterz!

SillyNiecy chapter 3 . 6/30/2003
I wrote some really long and odd review for this chapter, but stuped erred and it was lost into oblivion. Saa. Hopefully this one won't do the same. '. I don't think this was a bad story, it was great! You did will with the romance-no-action! lol. If I were you, and I'm not, I bed you're thanking God, lol- I'd put a little more action in there. Giggles kachinas. Silly spirits. Tee hee. Well, I'll be reviewing in Rubies and Gold, so don't forget about me, *sob*.



-May the Shovels of Insanity bless your life and home...
SillyNiecy chapter 2 . 6/30/2003
wai wai once more! This is going beautifully! Tee hee, so happy! So much romance! So much Mt Dew, I'm in heaven... (I just don't have Adamu-chan *frowns slightly*.) Ah well. I really can't type more, must read next chapter! Go silver go!


SillyNiecy chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Wai wai! *jumps around*. Umi/Ascot! I like the way it's turning out so far. I understand the whole... I want him, does he want me? kinda thingy. *blush*. Ah well, once you overcome that, things can turn out pretty well. Look at me, I'm insane and psycho, but I've been with Adam for over a year. Not much compared to some people... but still! Saa. Onto the next chapter! GO Niecy GO! *goes...*


Silver Thread chapter 3 . 5/2/2003
Wow, despite what you may think you are an awesome romance writer! That was one of the best pieces of Umi/Ascot fluff I have ever read!
fYr3 ph03nix chapter 3 . 12/29/2002
No way! i think you did wonderful fluffiness! good job! i can't even write like that. -_-
twin-ascot chapter 3 . 11/25/2002
That was so sweet! I loved it... This is going on my favorites list right now! Write more Asmi, please! Gomen, I haven't read many of your Clemis, since I'm a total Asmi fan... Well, write soon, or I'll sic all of Ascot's beasts on you!
Esthemer chapter 3 . 11/21/2002
I LOVE your writing! Ascot & Umi are my favorite couple, and you've really done them justice with your writing! *_*
Blood Everlasting chapter 3 . 11/8/2002
you are a nut if you thik this tory and your other romance fic sucked. I absolutely LOVED it! You rock my freaking world!lol but I really DO hope that you write some more fics! I was so enthralled with this one that I couldn't stop reading until I finished it! I love all of the stories of yours that I have read so far and pray that I'll see a lot more coming!

Love and peace and all that other jive.

Ja ne,

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