Reviews for Hospital Beds
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I think you did a great job with this. It was very believable and I enjoyed reading it. :) I also love how calmly Craig reacted to it. The ending was cute.
fallingwthstyle chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
And again, you don't give yourself enough credit :) I enjoyed reading that. You do a very good Tweek voice and internal monologue. I've seen some stories where it's done excessively to the point of being don't do that :) You get his nervousness and twitchiness just right, without going overboard about it. Even the voices in his head are very plausibly done.

'My voice just told me that I'm only good at being cliché' ...that was a nice line: Tweek really starting to confide in Craig.

There IS room for more here :) And if you were to continue this into a Craig helping Tweek get better and everything that follows story, I for one would read it.