|Reviews for The Quiet Ones|
| Bruna Pereira chapter 28 . 4/20
ps. ObliviousOne idea is gold!
| Bruna Pereira chapter 28 . 4/20
I'm so happy I found this one. You're so talented and writes so poetically it makes me wonder if you write for a living because you should. Anyway, I hope to hear, or should I say read(?), from you soon!
| Bruna Pereira chapter 21 . 4/20
so cute omg
| Bruna Pereira chapter 13 . 4/20
I loved what you did here! the difference between fanfiction and the show and it makes it almost better!
| Bruna Pereira chapter 7 . 4/19
oh my god! this is so good I'm out of words to describe how happy I am now that I found it!
| EllieDragon chapter 28 . 3/8
Hellloooo just finished reading this story! It is absolutely amazing! I wasn't sure at first but that was just me being in a bad mood lol and I'm so glad I continued reading bc it's one of the best I've read! I love how you're not going straight into a relationship with Daryl bc lets be honest that's extremely unrealistic bc Daryl is a smol bean. I also live the way you've wrote this story as well bc it reads like poetry to me and the way everything flows together just makes it so nice and easy to read without getting confused. I cannot wait for whenever you next update if you do. Hope you have a good day xxx
| ObliviousOne chapter 28 . 3/4
First time reader, just found this... And I'm already hooked. Binged this whole thing in less than 24 hours, and let me tell you something - you're amazing with tone. Really. I don't know if it's purely intentional or if you're just very in tune with Cal and Daryl's state of mind, but every time you write from their perspectives you convey some really intense stuff. I mean, you can really feel Daryl's loneliness, and when Cal was alone in the beginning your descriptions made it feel like she was right on the edge of madness... And that's slowly eased off, and you can actually feel her healing. It's incredibly impressive.
And although you sound a little dissatisfied with your chapters lately, I've loved every one... With only one scene as an exception. Specifically, her finding out about Merle and then immediately running into him. I think probably stretching them out a little more (or else her finding out only after running into him) might've been smoother. Having said that though, it didn't bother me enough to even slow me down, so I wouldn't worry about it too much.
Anyway, now that I've found this story I'm really looking forward to the next chapter - whenever that may be. And in the meantime I would never say no to a more lighthearted story about Cal and Daryl's running into each other in a walker-free universe? Maybe where Merle's in jail again, and they get off on the wrong foot at first, but keep running into each other in either semi ridiculous or sweet ways that are conducive to fluff?
Or... You know, something totally different , I don't know. I'm up for anything really. (:
Anyway - good luck with your new fic, and I'm very much looking forward to your next update!
| LauRa-ReaDinG-XoX chapter 28 . 2/3
This is a great story, live Daryl and Cal! Though I get what you mean about writing dark ‘heavy af shit’ compared to the light and fluffy. Either way, we’ll written and would love to read more about the pair
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/14
I am absolutely loving this story! You have written everything so realistically. I like how you have really made it your own story and added in many different events and details that are not in the show. I read this every spare moment I had in the past 2 days. I loved every single chapter so much. I really hope that you continue writing this story! I need to know what happens!
| Dezzal chapter 15 . 12/12/2017
Your just following canon to a tee. Thats boring
| He'sGotHeart chapter 28 . 12/11/2017
I love this!
| Cristiina chapter 28 . 12/10/2017
Please don't stop writing this story, I really love it
| Bluemom chapter 28 . 12/6/2017
This was a great chapter, well done. I love the way you write Daryl- you convey his thoughts without making him too chatty. The tension is page turning. Can’t wait for more and looking forward to your lighter piece
| Bluemom chapter 27 . 12/6/2017
This was an amazing chapter!
| Rea Josette chapter 28 . 12/5/2017
I’m always so excited to see this story updated and it is always worth the wait! Can’t wait for another update and tonread your newest project! I’m always up for something smutty!