Reviews for It Continues: The Fabulous Rewrite
Crystal Silvera chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
HAH XD

Eh, errors . . . well, all I really see is spacing and the ". . ."'s (I kept finding ".."). Nothing else that I can think of :P

Did you read /Fyre/? :3

Sarah reminds me of one of my friends . . .

Hilarious! XD I was laughing basically the whole time I read this (Mom: Why are you laughing so hard?). Absolutely hilarious - so, amazing job! (I haven't read the original, but I'm rewriting something of my own so I know how you feel :P)

Update soon; I'm favoriting and following!
kaitlyn chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
I LOVED the writing of the wolf dude and I think the rewrite is awesome!
413Lyall Areyel chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
Well, seems rather interesting, though I don't like Sarah much and don't think I will.

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413Lyall Areyel chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Seems interesting. I think I am most like Koren; I don't like the RRs much at the moment, but Milo and Nora seem alright, I guess.

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Foxface'sSpecialPie chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
I like this. :)
Bushground chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Being unable to log in right now, I'm done trying for today.
Welcome back! Congratulations on the fabulous rewrite, the story is still awesome, and a bit more suited to us teenagers. Also, good with the descriptions, one cannot go on without them! Can't wait for more of the story to be fabulously rewritten. Fair winds and strong seas, or however the heck that saying goes!