|Reviews for Dreams In The Air|
| AmeNeko chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Sorry for the delay, man, stuff happened...
Anyways, I love how you write them like an actual Pokemon episode, and keep the characters in character (which can be difficult with crossover pairings). Gingka and Ash's interactions were funny, they made LOL. Gingka and Skyla's little moment there was very cute and well done. Minor Ash/Iris appeases me as well :D
There were several places where you forgot to hit Enter, though. Certain paragraphs were all bunched up when they could've been five because of the dialogue. Just a helpful hint...
Another thing; if Gingka has Pokemon and no Beys as far as I can see, why are we still calling him a Beyblader? I really don't understand the logic behind that.
Anyways, good job, my fellow writer. Keep up the good work; happy writing!