Reviews for The Right Guy
sri ffn chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
Shallow is quite a negative term when attached to personality. I don't know if I want to tag Bella as shallow.

I do tag her as sensible because even though she has bad judgement in men, sooner or later she gets out of them. And that's what matters.

Awesome chapter. Right under her nose is right.

sri ffn chapter 2 . 5/27/2014

Do you know I actually went back up to check if this is a Carlisle x Bella story, then I thought ew, she kissed Carlisle. I can't help but see him as a father figure. Never thought he'd cheat on Esme.

It's like, I came out of a dream and phewed when I read Edward was still there, serving on that bar.

sri ffn chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
Light-hearted is exactly what I need right now.

I'm sent by DH78 who recc'd this story in one of hers.

This looks awesome! Thank you!

sehkra chapter 8 . 5/10/2014
Great chapter. And not just cause they had sex, although that was great, it was just truly very well written.
sehkra chapter 7 . 5/10/2014
Hooray (for Edward) not james
sehkra chapter 4 . 5/10/2014
This is really well written. Loving every line.
sehkra chapter 3 . 5/10/2014
Right in front of your nose indeed!
sehkra chapter 2 . 5/10/2014
Freaked over Carlisle, thank goodness you pulled the pi before it went too far. Ps Edward seems to be cleaning glasses an awful lot - how have those girls not noticed?
sehkra chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
First chapter in, and I love the premise.
anamart05 chapter 6 . 5/6/2014
Trank you!
anamart05 chapter 5 . 5/6/2014
Thank you!
anamart05 chapter 7 . 5/5/2014
anamart05 chapter 4 . 5/5/2014
jajajaj, ... Thank you!
anamart05 chapter 3 . 5/5/2014
Thank you!
anamart05 chapter 2 . 5/5/2014
Im glad Esme called
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