|Reviews for A Baby-Sitters Club Christmas|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
It's OBSESSED, not absessed. If you aren't going to take the time to proofread like you do your Percy Jackson ones, just don't bother posting, okay?!
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
Given that your chapters are so short, there's really no excuse for you not proofreading them and making sure everything is spelled right.
| Bindizoya-Sagittaquarius chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
How does this story with so little words/plot get more reviews than mine?! When there's drama & action in every corner in mine! ?
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
This has potential, but:
1. Work on your grammar.
2. New paragraph when a character speaks.
3. Needs to be longer.
4. Needs more detail.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
It's amazing your Percy Jackson stories are better written.