|Reviews for Loyalties Undying|
| TheWordMasterofFiction chapter 31 . 10/9
So, this is the third time I've read this fic (to be fair, I honestly forgot I read it months before until I reread it again on Tuesday...and again today), and every time I read it, I love it. This is one of, if not the best, fem!Pyro fics I've read (and the best SniperxPyro fic I've come across), and I've been through every Fem!Pyro and PyroxSniper fic on FF and AO3. Seriously, it's great stuff. You bring new dynamics to each character's backstories, while still managing to keep their in-game personalities in perspective. When I read TF2 fanfics, I try to read each character's lines in their respective accent, to see if the wording fits the character- yours certainly does. The dialogue isn't chummy or over the top, and everything they say feels like realistic conversation. I wish you had done a little more with Scout's prophetic dreams- perhaps tying them in to Pyro's visions?- because those were some of my favorite portions of this fic. My only criticism would be that the ending felt very rushed, but that could be due to the fact that I've read this fic so many times that the ending sort of gets blurry for me. All in all, this is a great fanfiction for a series with underrated fics, and I hope you're proud of your accomplishment! Great job!
| CHiKa-RoXy chapter 14 . 6/30
Aw man, this is the saddest thing I can think of ;~;
| Kingtutgaming chapter 31 . 4/11
Damn this story was fun to read.
| Analyn Rockwand chapter 31 . 12/3/2014
| Analyn Rockwand chapter 26 . 12/1/2014
OMG. That was BEAUTIFUL.
| Analyn Rockwand chapter 23 . 12/1/2014
Oh. My. Flaming. God. THAT WAS AWESOME! I CAN"T STOP SMILING! FATHER-DAUGHTER FTW!
| Analyn Rockwand chapter 19 . 12/1/2014
"Would you like me to treat zhat burn?" Fucking PERFECT!
| Fairyhaven13 chapter 31 . 10/10/2014
I loved this. I mean, it was slightly more emotional than I'm used to for short scenes, but understandable. And it's very nice to see a fic for once where the Scout's not a TOTAL complete jerk. He's all nice and stuff (with a big head) towards the end. D You did a great job!
| The Silent song chapter 31 . 9/16/2014
I just wanted to let you know this is the best fem!pyro portrayal and fic i have ever read and there are quite a few fem!pyro fics out there. I loved every minute of this and I was so relieved to find out it wasn't going to be some sappy romance fic. I loved the humor and your take on the classes is great and the end of this fic really made me smile. Reading a good book, short story, or a fic always makes me feel some sort of emotion and this gave me chills, and made me smile. I couldn't stop reading until I was done! With that I just want to say that you did an outstanding job and I would love to read more from you in the future! (If you write more tf2 fics that is. It's totally up to you)
| Mitsuki Shigamatsu chapter 27 . 5/25/2014
One for sorrow...
| Mitsuki Shigamatsu chapter 12 . 5/25/2014
'Work makes you Free', so Medic was at Auswitz (sorry if I misspelled it).
| Dracona Mortis chapter 31 . 4/4/2014
I... Don't... Can't...
| ShadowX116 chapter 31 . 2/11/2014
Wat? No epilogue?
Haha, oh well.
Loved the story tho! Here is a cookie, and have a wonderful day! :D
| IcestormTundra chapter 31 . 12/16/2013
ah the good old fashioned feminist fanfics, always a good read even if I don't believe in any of it myself
Pyro was interesting in this, not just another Mary-Sue or disfigured man, and I like how you brought both Medic and sniper into it with a little backstory, not many authors do that with TF2 )
all in all very good story, and keep up the good writing amico 3
| CaptainOldDog chapter 31 . 12/15/2013
Nice story, a bit sappy at points, but still a good story.