|Reviews for If I Can Just Hold You, Please|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2022
Love the title
| Braveheart57 chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
OMG! This was hilarious. The Doctor being awkward about peeing is my prime subject matter, always pleased to see more of that, especially mixed in with a totally normal adventure plot. I could definitely see you writing a good "the doctor has to pee"-fic if it would tickle your fancy. Or rather 'tinkle" your fancy hehe ;)
| B1gbadw0lf chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
hehe, godspeed.. brilliant
| MintAeroBars chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
Oh my gosh, this story is hilarious and brilliant! You write the Doctor really well, he's perfect, and this is the most adorable little one shot.
| DerangedOptimist chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
Oh, this fic is fantastic :)
| eldell chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
I love the description of the tourist pamphlet and the initial setting. I totally get Rose. Probably because I can very much relate to rainy wheather conditions at the moment.
Logging them out of the TARDIS... I guess she's cross with him and not letting him back in because he wasn't paying attention?
The Doctor seems a bit out of character, but then he appears to be delirious. Might explain the strange behaviour.
And now the planet is out of character. How can the rain just stop? ;) Maybe Rose and the Doctor should make another trip then.
| Brilliant chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
Oh my God, just brilliant. Not what I was looking for, but I'm glad I stumbled upon it!
| Peachuzoid chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Hurt/comfort with a dash of humor! I thoroughly enjoyed this fic as well. :)
| stilltoolazy chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
And that's what I get for trying to type out a long well thought out review on my phone. Hitting the post button prematurely. As such I apologize for any typos in the previous review. Now where was I? Ahh yes. The Pants Discussion.
Admittedly I'm not a huge fluff fan but this was the right amount to be sweet without being over-the-top like many stories tend to do. Rose and the doctor have an unusual relationship and personally I can't ever see it progressing much past this point as much as Rose would like it to. But I digress.
The line that had me in absolute stitches was when the doctor jokingly suggested 'doing as the gods do' followed by Hafna matter-of-factly telling him to do exactly that. And of course Rose's little revenge. And the bit with her saying 'your clothes were wet so Hafna removed them. Professionally. ' And finally the whole 'wouldn't it be great if I could snap my fingers and the TARDIS doors would open? ' Heh.
Well I could sit here and quote your entire story back to you but instead I think I shall congratulate you on a fantastic story and hope to hear more from you.
Oh! And the whump. The dark sadist part of me loved the whump in a way that is probably not normal. That sounds creepy. It probably is.
| toolazytologin chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
This. Since I began paging through Dr. Who fanfiction this was the exact type of story I was looking for. You covered everything. Literally everything.
Where to begin? Firstly I rather enjoyed the planet. A planet of perpetual rain is a rather neat idea and to add the legend of "the gods' pee" was, in the words of our favourite doctor, brilliant. Everything came together so nicely including the key at the end. It felt just wibbly wobbly timey wimey enough to be a genuine episode. The dialogue was fantastic! There was never a point in your story where I thought 'oh he would never say that! ' Everything flowed beautifully.
The fevered delirium was written marvelously. Little things like 'how strange to be able to control pain! ' or 'his face had never had friends before' and of course 'gravity that fickle wench!' all really lent to the feeling of a fevered mind.
I rather enjoyed the relationship you established between them. I think you did a great job of capturing their complex bond in the playful banter, the awkwardness (The Pants Discussion! I love how you capitalized it to make it a title! )
| HardfacedQueenofMisadventure chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Alright, I admit it - I laughed rather a lot. And it was very cute in places, and very much in character. Definitely worth a favorite!
Not sure how I'd react if I landed on a planet where the rain may be the pee of the gods, though :D
| asongtosaygoodbye chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
awh, loved ittt.
| AuroraBorealis13 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Brilliant. XD You definitely had me laughing.
| goldacharmed chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Amazing story and very well written!
| Captain donna chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
You don't know how difficult it is to try and find a good romance novel where the woman cares for the man's wounds or illness or whatever but you don't know how happy you made me when I found this! Molto bene!