Reviews for Tears of Laughter, Joy and Pain
Fullmoon2335 chapter 2 . 3/4/2013
Cool... as much as Neville is shy, he really is very knowledgeable, he just doesn't have the confidence. Please make Neville the older brother because Harry really is clueless about Wizarding culture. I mean he really doesn't even know that much about his own history let alone others. It would almost make more sense if Neville picked his younger brother up from an orphanage or saved him from horrible foster parents or something to that effect. It would at least make Harry have an excuse for being ignorant compared to Neville. Shrug shoulders, just a suggestion. I look forward to any updates in the future! Good luck writing! :D
Fullmoon2335 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
AWESOME! I normally don't like 1st person pov, but I'm beginning to believe that has more to do with some authors not being able to write in first person pov. Onwards and upwards to other things. An interesting first chapter. You've let the reader know through multiple hints where in the Harry Potter series you're story takes place, have an adorable bonding moment between Harry and Neville who sadly didn't have much to do with each other throughout the series, I feel the need to stress ROOM OF REQUIREMENTS, and two basically orphaned boys WISH. Drum roll please... and you have the Room of Requirements trying to fulfill their wish and or Hogwarts. The Room some days seems more like a single room in which Hogwarts is able to interact with her inhabitants. I look forward to seeing where you take this story! Good luck writing! :D
Moon Lantern chapter 2 . 1/31/2013
This is amazing, as well as heartwarming. I cannot wait to find out more. Keep writing please.
Also, I would be so grateful if you could have a look at my story, please. It's called "The Guardian Diaries- Book 1- Luz en el Oscuro- Part 1".
Don't worry, it's in English!
Sarabeth Moon chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
I love it ! It's really great i can't wait to read the next chapter(s) !
TwilightEclps chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
OMG!
This is going to be great!
:)
The First Maraudette chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I'm reeaaaaaaaaaally curious! I think that the room is going to somehow let them meet their parents. I hope that's what happens. Update soon, the suspense is killing me :)
horselovr171 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
OK, now I'm curious. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.