There’s something so off putting about Christian. He’s a child. And idiot. Someone should beat his face in. Ordering and demanding shit like the little bitch baby that he is. Wah wah wah. Cry a river you stupid fuck Christian. He’s a dumb fuck. You write him like a dumb fuck that needs his teeth bashed in and his dick shot off. He’s acting like a predator. Good job writing a sick fuck

Really like this story. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

Bitch Ana didn’t want your crazy ass self anyways you stupid fuck.

How many fucking times does Christian have to say as you wish before he fucking gets into his fucking egotistical head that she doesn’t want his brand of relationship?! Jesus fucking Christ no means no you fucking groomer. Disgusting piece of shit Christian. Go fuck your pedophile best friend. Or just die.

A really great alternate story! I just love it!

Just read about your upcoming book and will be ordering in just a moment. It made me come back to this story for a minute - one of my alll time favorites! I so wish you’d finish it. It’s a great take on FSOG!

I'd buy all of your original stories again if you'd only gone back and finish this one!

Why would you start a good story and not finish it , that’s so not right!

So what makes CG think he is deserving of her? He is a fucking sadistical monster.
And this is so much word for word of the original story that it's boring. All you have done is re write the original story and change 1 or 2 things. Not original at all. Yawn.

I hope Ana keeps stong !

omg awesome please update soon

are you still into writing?

Love

Buying Snowman but my holiday wish is for you to finish this wonderful story - maybe as a thank you to everyone who has cheered you on?

He is in deep do do ! But that's Christian s Owen selfish fault ! ! !