Reviews for Tempest and Titania, Storm Siblings
mohamed ali 02 chapter 2 . 11/18
Lightning style: Flying Dragon Striking Heaven Shaking Thunder Cannon
really?! REALLY?! anyone will be dead before saying the name
Asuka1920 chapter 11 . 8/16
Can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/29
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JayDuck chapter 11 . 3/11
Polaruspax first of all Kurama was never removed in this story so fuck you, and second of all even if he did its his fucking story you stupid ass
Oblivion196 chapter 11 . 1/23
This was great!
Guitarguy420 chapter 11 . 3/10/2016
It's a Trap! Naruto, those are not the fires of Amaterasu, their Flame God Slayer flames!
Squarekiddo chapter 5 . 10/21/2015
I adore the Siblings thing you got going on, but what you did this chapter was plain stupid, I understand you have made Naruto alot weaker for some reason, by taking away is physical prowess, and kyuubi, but you are ignoring other things so blatantly, honestly, you seriously think Naruto, an at least double S-rank shinobi is stupid?

Dont get me wrong here we all know Naruto is a goofball, but he is a far fucking reach from stupid, im sorry but he should have been able to win against Gildarts rather easily, simple hidden Clone with a kunai to hes neck while he made hes first head on charge.

It honestly bothers me how you make hi so stupid in battle, the dude was in a fucking Shinobi war, and you have him charging head first like a fucking Natsu wannabe, hes a SHINOBI, a man at Naruto level should even have clones hidden around him at all times for simple substitution just in case, but noooo, make him stupid, seriously that battle with *Gildarts was pathetic, utterly pathetic.

And a shinobi in earthland infiltrating like this? again with the stupid act, send a simple shadow clone, go in, learn, dispel.
im not being ignorant here when I say that it would be childs play for Naruto, the dude escapes ANBU and age 10...

Im gonna be totally honest here, it seems like you WANTED a 13 year old Naruto in this story, but you didnt make a 13 year old Naruto, you made a 22 year old Naruto that looks 13, you cant simply ignore what hes done after he was 13 just cause he looks 13 now, even then he would have easily infiltrated Raven tail, due stole the most important scroll in hes village before that.

Shape up dude.
ARSLOTHES chapter 11 . 10/19/2015
Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you decide to update again
GenesisHWinter chapter 7 . 6/22/2015
Great chapter! Couldn't help but laugh at the end of the Gildarts and Naruto fight though, seems like something Gildarts would do. Btw about the Gildarts being capable of destroying Konoha? I think he probably could, although he'd probably do it by accident.
K chapter 11 . 5/29/2015
Please update! This story is awesome
jbadillodavila chapter 2 . 4/9/2015
Me gusta hjc
darkworkangel chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
do you plan to finish this it's a great story
Guest chapter 11 . 3/7/2015
the story is so intense! Please follow up (: is the one who use Amateratsu sasuke? Cause you did not mention which of the seventh Kin it was.. INTENSE!
naruto08738 chapter 11 . 12/30/2014
it is my favorite story . I am begging you please update it at least once in a month .
Guest chapter 11 . 10/20/2014
If you havent died since augest please update your story
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