|Reviews for Twin Trouble:The Beginning|
| Jacey chapter 4 . 1/12/2013
Ohh! This is hilarious on so many levels! :D love it!
| The Beautiful Filth chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Please continue :D I want more pranks!
| The Beautiful Filth chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
OMG this is so funny! xD
| Juliette chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Hahahahahaha that was hilarious XD Like Amy said "Poor Natara" ;) I love the twins! Their so funny and ado-ra-ble :D Update soon!
| Of Jumbled Thoughts chapter 4 . 12/15/2012
Hmmmmmm...Natara seems to have a problem with liquid dessert toppings...;)
| Crimson Endings chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
Haha,oh my gosh,this was so funny Lexi!
I can't wait to read more!
| Crimson Endings chapter 2 . 11/30/2012
Haha,this was so funny Lexi!
Can't wait for more!
| Of Jumbled Thoughts chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
The twins are cute but at ten months the majority of infants cannot walk without support from someone older or leaning against a table of something like that, so Natara most likely would not have let her *walk* in on her own, and also most babies at ten months can't say more than one word.
| bugreid chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
This was hilarious! I love Natara's random mood swings! One minute she's all "I love you Mal." *bats eyelashes* then the next she's like "I HATE YOU! GO FALL IN A SHARK PIT!" Lol! XD
| The Sarcastic Polar Bear chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I'd like to give you advice. When the speaker changes, start a new paragraph. Like this:
"I'm a peanut!" the banana said.
"No, you're a banana," the toe argued.
"I like soup," the floor announced.
| Of Jumbled Thoughts chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Why E and C on the booties? Lol at the mood swings. Natara's usually so calm, I think that a pregnancy would make her through-the-roof hormonal. JanELLE and ELLEn. Nice names
| Crimson Endings chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Poor Mal...Nat abuses him!
Love those names by the way!