Reviews for There
Drakonflight chapter 1 . 4/1
You realize - and I think most of the villagers would, too - that at this point Jack's body would have decayed into something very, very gross and barely recognizable as him. Not something that would give closure to a little girl.
CutieSOS chapter 1 . 2/26
so good
thequietreader chapter 1 . 2/14
Oh, god. That's lovely and sad and UGH. I just watched the movie, and this has all the feels I felt.
Agnidivya chapter 1 . 1/29
Ouch, indeed.
Scar of hope chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
This actually caused me physical pain. I love you.
Hebi R chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Stab. Right in the feels. Owies.
the ticking clock chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
This little piece is just exploding with emotion and demanding to be read. You write with such a wonderful and captivating voice. Amazing job!
Mrs.DylanLightwoodIvashkov chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Short, sweet, powerful
RememberThatCoolPerson chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I think you broke the fandom. . . FIX IT!
Foxlight the Dragon Trainer chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Love this! ;D
Uryuu-Nipaa chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Yeah, break my heart, why don't you. Really depressing but really awesome as well.
notyourleo chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
...ouch. ;n;
thelegendarysupernerd chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Oh the feels
Aronim chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
This is good.
But it would be great if you didn't spoil the final line completely with your synopsis. I think this little piece would have more impact if I didn't know from the start exactly what you were building up to. In short, I think the impact would be greater if you had a more vague little synopsis like "They search the lake, but the boy isn't there anymore." That still has the mystery, without spoiling it all.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
wow, you sure now how to stomp on the heart strings dont you?
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