|Reviews for The Discovery of the Heart of the Shadow King|
| Usui Miki chapter 11 . 12/18/2014
Hahaha screw the 4th wall! I really loved this, great job!
| Artamas15 chapter 11 . 10/23/2014
Yay breaking the forth wall is awesome! And if I were you i'd make the twins mouths disappear too. XD
| angellovsyaoi chapter 23 . 10/12/2014
aww poor kyokyo! His mom must have been so brave :'(
| Karkatsbabe chapter 23 . 10/10/2014
Kyoya needs to find a wife And he's in bed with her right now.
Very cute and sappy, I love it, as always!
| headache gurl chapter 23 . 10/10/2014
I just read this entire thing, sorry to say. I couldn't stop myself for all the wrong reasons. For the record, the Japanese do not use cutsie names like "dear" and Kyoya never ever Ever EVER would. But it's your fantasy so you can do with him what you will. Just don't fool yourself into thinking you nailed the character cause you didn't. The writing is stiff but overall not bad. The OC was a clear MarySue so I hope you got your needs met with it. Anyway, I'm off to read something better - sorry - else.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
I have read this story in full about seven times, (and credit it as inspiration for my own fanfiction). I absolutely love how kyoya is written so painstakingly in character! Really a fantastic job feathersong darling, my absolute favourite,
| otaku-life-rocks chapter 11 . 4/24/2014
oh my god! I loved how you ended this chapter!
| That Person chapter 4 . 4/8/2014
| BasicallyComplicated chapter 22 . 11/30/2013
I'm impressed. Chapter 22 was steamy, but did not include M-rated material. Well done.
| cruelistnightmare chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
OMG! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS CHAPPIE! EEEEKKK! HOW IRONIC! XD
| Sunstar Writer chapter 22 . 11/25/2013
Woooo... she is NOT innocent as she seems! And neither is Kyoya! Little devil ;D
| Hellosweetie4737 chapter 22 . 11/4/2013
I LOVE THIS CONTINUE IT SOON OR DIE. O.O
| lionlover100 chapter 5 . 9/25/2013
can you start chapter 4 on "the pumkin" it was sooooooo good XD please
| angellovsyaoi chapter 11 . 9/14/2013
Lol the ending was to funny
| angellovsyaoi chapter 10 . 9/14/2013
AAAAAAWWWWWW IM LIK SCREAMING AND COOING RITE NOW! THAT WAS TOOO CUUUUTTEE